Review of chapter "Aborting a Haxil Beast" from Looneyboyo
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I love this series. You do a great job integrating Charmed and Angel, and as someone who's never watched Charmed beyond early series one I really like how clear you make the story; even when you cut bits out of an adventure it's still really easy to follow what's meant to be happening, and when it isn't a quick wiki search is all that's needed to fill in the gaps. All I would say by way of criticism is you've got a lot of characters around now, and the Charmed stories might struggle to incorporate so many extra bodies (Angel always had more characters, and you can fit the Halliwells into the Cordy/Fred roles with a little massaging).
Review By [Looneyboyo] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aborting a Haxil Beast" from AllenPitt
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So, at some point (much) later in the story, does a mysterious young man named "Connor" show up from the future?
Comments from author:
No plans for THAT happening, but certain events will take place...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rogue Demon Hunter" from BrownFinderth
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Thanks to the author for another well done update!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Shades of Grey" from Aslook
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Save Doyle please! He was one of my favorite charecters!!! Also his visions have no-where to go. Angel will go insane if he gets them, and Paige already has powers. Also I doubt he'd kiss her. Or Angel.
Review of chapter "Saving Shades of Grey" from SnakeFox
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Hmm... I really like Doyle, I thought it was a shame he died in the show. But, his death was his big moment. He went out a hero, he gave his life to save not only his friends, but dozens of strangers. So I'd say feel free to take that away from him, but only if you have a good idea of how to develop the character from here. Because unless you can think of something cool for him to do with his life past this point, I think he'd just become irrelevant, and dying heroically would be better than that. Just a thought.
Comments from author:
That is DEFINITELY a valid point, and something I will give strong consideration to, I assure you.
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Shades of Grey" from JonnWolfe
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I like Doyle, and since Cordy doesn't have a thing to do with this story - and Phoebe Does - his brain smashing visions have nowhere to go. Let him live, and be a natural foil/flame for Pheobe? Seers Unite, and all that.
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Shades of Grey" from BrownFinderth
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Oh, exciting days (hours?) are here! Time to see what our heroes are made of!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Twice Blessed" from BrownFinderth
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My thanks to the author for this update! Glad that Piper's child was born without any problem.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Twice Blessed" from JonnWolfe
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Wonderful!
Personal Request: When Chris comes, 'to save Wyatt', amend his goal to 'to save Wyatt and Connor'. I can really see Connor becoming real, and hopefully Paige will be his momma. =) Witchlighter/Destroyer?
Comments from author:
Let's just say I have some plans where Chris and Connor are concerned that I'd rather not give away too early...
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Magic, No Boundaries" from JonnWolfe
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Still loving this story, and hoping that it continues soon!
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Day the Magic Died" from mendenbar
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Sorry, but I had to chuckle at this chapter. Usually unicorns (traditionally, that is) can only be controlled by a virgin and I don't think they have any available at the moment. I never considered that part of being a vampire might be magically induced. Hmmm.
Review By [mendenbar] • Date [16 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Very very good. I like Paige's inner thoughts and Angel's motivational speech. Glad everything's working out well for the group.
Comments from author:
Always nice to hear that I succeeded in my goal when it comes to personal interaction; thanks.
Review By [Shieldage] • Date [10 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ritual of Consumption" from spike
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Great as usual keep up the good work
Review By [spike] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Witches, Demons, and Bachelor Parties" from spike
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Hmm curious to find out who that guy in leather is with a crossbow but my guess is its Wesley afterall that's what he was wearing when he showed up on Angel
Comments from author:
No, it's just the Darklighter who attacked them in the last chapter; Wesley's not scheduled to show up for a while.
Review By [spike] • Date [26 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Secret Families" from Shieldage
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Good stuff. I wonder if there are any otherwise suitable babysitters that really really don't like vampires ;)