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Review of chapter "See No Evil, Hear No Evil, Speak No Evil" from Wise
Review:
I urge you not to hesitate to allow the episode plots to wildly diverge from canon. You really don't need to just rehash what happened in (insert episode) with an (Angel, Charmed - pick one) twist. If you are going to do scenarios from existing episodes, let them go off the rails.
Comments from author:
Don't worry; I plan to diverge more as the series unfolds and both sides grow further away from their solo histories.
Review By [Wise] • Date [16 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lesser of Two Evils" from bookworm
Review:
Yeesh. I take it this happened in an Angel episode, and I'm guessing Paige's presence helped them save more of the Andersons, but still, eugh. At any rate, I'm still enjoying the story.
Comments from author:
It did happen in an episode, but the only thing Paige really did was save the Andersons greater trauma by getting Angel there sooner; in canon, he only got back AFTER Ryan set the house on fire, but Seth and Paige A were safe and Angel rescued Stephanie from her room.

That said, glad you liked the story; we have a 'Charmed' rewrite next.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [15 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Flawed Fathers" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Good to keep Doyle's father alive. Great to see him with an honest date
Comments from author:
I assume you just mean that Axtius's survival is good for plot purposes, considering that he's still a racist monster?

That said, it's good to know that my Doyle/Phoebe relationship works.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [23 Oct 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Murder in Your Sleep" from Eureka
Review:
WTF? So I take it that Weasel DOES know that Angel is a vamp? And just like in the show any time things get hairy he automatically blames Angel for it and tried to hurt him without knowing a darn thing! And you just stop it there without giving us a clue if anyone can stop the arrow.
Review By [Eureka] • Date [7 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Inspiring Nymphs" from Wise
Review:
I can't help but wonder how you're going to deal with the whole Connor storyline, if at all. Angel having a child with Darla would probably destroy his relationship with Paige. But then again, what if Darla wasn't the mother? What if Paige was? A damphir who is also 1/4 witch and 1/4 whitelighter would be... odd.

For that matter, would Connor still be Connor? Piper beat the odds of the whole 'Halliwells tend to bear only daughters' thing, but would Paige?
Comments from author:
I have plans, and that's all I'll say on that issue right now.
Review By [Wise] • Date [24 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aborting a Haxil Beast" from Looneyboyo
Review:
I love this series. You do a great job integrating Charmed and Angel, and as someone who's never watched Charmed beyond early series one I really like how clear you make the story; even when you cut bits out of an adventure it's still really easy to follow what's meant to be happening, and when it isn't a quick wiki search is all that's needed to fill in the gaps. All I would say by way of criticism is you've got a lot of characters around now, and the Charmed stories might struggle to incorporate so many extra bodies (Angel always had more characters, and you can fit the Halliwells into the Cordy/Fred roles with a little massaging).
Review By [Looneyboyo] • Date [5 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Aborting a Haxil Beast" from AllenPitt
Review:
So, at some point (much) later in the story, does a mysterious young man named "Connor" show up from the future?
Comments from author:
No plans for THAT happening, but certain events will take place...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [25 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rogue Demon Hunter" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Thanks to the author for another well done update!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [30 Oct 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Shades of Grey" from Aslook
Review:
Save Doyle please! He was one of my favorite charecters!!! Also his visions have no-where to go. Angel will go insane if he gets them, and Paige already has powers. Also I doubt he'd kiss her. Or Angel.
Review By [Aslook] • Date [5 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Shades of Grey" from SnakeFox
Review:
Hmm... I really like Doyle, I thought it was a shame he died in the show. But, his death was his big moment. He went out a hero, he gave his life to save not only his friends, but dozens of strangers. So I'd say feel free to take that away from him, but only if you have a good idea of how to develop the character from here. Because unless you can think of something cool for him to do with his life past this point, I think he'd just become irrelevant, and dying heroically would be better than that. Just a thought.
Comments from author:
That is DEFINITELY a valid point, and something I will give strong consideration to, I assure you.
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [4 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Shades of Grey" from JonnWolfe
Review:
I like Doyle, and since Cordy doesn't have a thing to do with this story - and Phoebe Does - his brain smashing visions have nowhere to go. Let him live, and be a natural foil/flame for Pheobe? Seers Unite, and all that.
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [3 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Shades of Grey" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Oh, exciting days (hours?) are here! Time to see what our heroes are made of!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [2 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Twice Blessed" from BrownFinderth
Review:
My thanks to the author for this update! Glad that Piper's child was born without any problem.
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Birth of the Twice Blessed" from JonnWolfe
Review:
Wonderful!

Personal Request: When Chris comes, 'to save Wyatt', amend his goal to 'to save Wyatt and Connor'. I can really see Connor becoming real, and hopefully Paige will be his momma. =)
Witchlighter/Destroyer?
Comments from author:
Let's just say I have some plans where Chris and Connor are concerned that I'd rather not give away too early...
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "No Magic, No Boundaries" from JonnWolfe
Review:
Still loving this story, and hoping that it continues soon!
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [7 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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