Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
DragonelfReview:
Currently this story feels just like a prologue and I hope you get inspired to add more chapters to this story.
::Gives the plot bunny some carrot stew::
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There is nothing new under the
sun but there are lots of old
things we don't know.
- Ambrose Bierce
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Review By [
Dragonelf] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Not Rated
