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Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
It was JACK that got channeled into Xander during Ethan's Halloween adventure?! *laughs self silly* Oh, this series is SO getting bookmarked for later reading! Thanks for this. *g*
Comments from author:
Very glad you liked it! :D I got the idea from the Halloween challenge that year and jrabbit's post about it and just had to write it. Twinkie was originally a stand-alone but incorporated itself into my already existing series when I wrote Lost in LA. I hope that you like the rest of the series as much. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [3 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from Obsidian
Review:
*sits back and cackles insanely*
Comments from author:
lol That was pretty much my reaction once I'd written this! :)
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [6 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from Bobboky
Review:
love this short
Comments from author:
Again, thank you! :D I had great fun writing it. It just popped straight into my head as soon as I saw the challenge and refused to go away. But then, now I've gotten round to writing Lost, in LA, it turns out that it fits in perfectly to the universe! :D
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Awesome :)

Yay for the nameless guy :D
Comments from author:
Thank you muchly! :)

Love that nameless guy!
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from manic
Review:
Wonerfully amusing! Jack and Xander crack me up. They are so different, and yet so alike!
Review By [manic] • Date [10 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from (Past Donor)Ponder
Review:
Nice story, thanks. Congrats on the COA nom. Some stiff competition in this category this year, hard choices.

*** Ponder
Comments from author:
Thank you!! :D I think Twinkie's the shortest story in its category and I'm unbelievably chuffed with the nomination, even if it doesn't win. *crosses fingers in hopes it does*

Kennie
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [20 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from Amai
Review:
*giggle*
Comments from author:
*hugs*
Review By [Amai] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from anouk
Review:
So very Jack :) Great little story.
Comments from author:
:D Thanks!
Review By [anouk] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from Elleria
Review:
Amusing.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Elleria] • Date [16 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Nice, short and concise. Very good.

I do like the idea of an investigation after the collapse of the sinkhole...

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from purrfus
Review:
While I am always happy to see Halloween fics - at any time of the year - I really want good fics not just words thrown on the page.

That being said - this is great. You conveyed so much with so few words.

I'd loved to see a whole series of ficlets, or a large fic from Jack's POV, but this is really perfect the way it is.
Comments from author:
*wibble*
I thought I was in for a flaming there! Instead I got a wonderful review!
*hugs* Thank you!!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [31 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from Ramenth
Review:
Ohh man that was good. I'd love to see this get developed more, even if there isn't really a logical place for it to go.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked. :D That's the problem though, I can't really see anywhere else for this to go. Here's hoping the muse gets inspired!
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [31 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
Oooo! Loved the idea of Soldier Guy in Xander's head being Jack O'Neill.

Keep writing!

(^_^)/
BEM
Comments from author:
Yeah, I was working on Slayers in Space when I noticed jrabbit's challenge and the idea just popped into my head and stuck there! It was so good I just had to write it. :D
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [31 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from SpiralMemory
Review:
heh, really cute. Short, but full of flavor...kind of like a twinkie:)
Comments from author:
lol I really have to try Twinkies! Shame they don't sell them in the UK. :(
Review By [SpiralMemory] • Date [31 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Most Important Twinkie of the Day" from Scrappychic
Review:
Very funny.

This could possibly work into a sequel when the SGC investigates the Sunnydale Sinkhole and finds that the place is real, and possibly finds that the people he remembers from his dream actually exist.
Comments from author:
Oh, don't! You're giving my muse ideas...
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [31 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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