Review of chapter "Halloween Night" from AlphaBeta
Review:
This is looking mighty good. Please update soon. The only real thing I have a problem with is Naruto is a girl. I am not really into the gender switching thing, but other then that I enjoyed the story so far.
Comments from author:
Thanks ^_^ If it makes you feel any better, the Naruto that Dawn become was an AU Naruto named Naru who was always a girl. If that doesn't help, well, I'll just try to keep my writing good enough that it isn't a problem.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [23 Nov 08] • Not Rated
I am confused as all get-out, but you have definitely captured my interest. I look forward to more of your story and how the Helloween fallout changes Our Heroes.
Comments from author:
What exactly are you confused about, because I'd probably be able to clear it up. Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing ^_^
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue: The Picks" from Shadohime
Review:
I'm going to see how many costumes I could name. Willow is Nelial Tu Oderschvank from Bleach, Xander is Gaara from Naruto, Jonathon is Hitsugaya from Bleach, Cordy is Gatomon from Digimon, Oz is Leomon from the same...and that's about all I can get.
Comments from author:
You're right on all counts and I'll reveal the rest next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated