It depressed the hell outa me when I saw it had been 7 and a halh years since you added to this story. I enjoyed what there was immensely! Please, PLEASE, come back and write more!
Review By [nerfherder] • Date [7 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Neat story. I haven't read many crossovers with Nikita or Section and you seem to have a good handle on those characters. Hopefully the SGC can provide the bang he needs, after all they have blown up a Sun!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [5 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
I have read the entire story, well what's there at least. I loved it all, it really inspired me. In fact i wrote my own but instead of having Dawn and Xander go to Sunnydale i had them go to the Firefly Universe that happens to be there own. I haven't put it out because he first chapter is the same unchanged for the most part. and the rest is not even remotely as good as yours. I just wanted to share and say that you inspired me. I hope that my words will inspire you...
Hi, this is a great story. I really like the attitudes of Xander and Dawn. They seem to fit with their history with Section One and Buffy's reaction to them is typical. I would like to read more about them, the upcoming marriage, Section One, etc.. So, update soon, PLEASE!!!
Wauzi
Review By [Wauzi] • Date [1 Aug 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Great story hope it isn't going to be forgotten. There really aren't enough good Dawn/Xander stories. Very nice attention to detail with the spy stuff. I t will be interesting to see how an assault on The First Evil goes.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [16 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wondering around the website and found this story, and almost passed it by. I never watched the series or saw the movie and just wasn't sure. Something made me stop and check the reviews. They made me stop and read this story.
A wonderfully well written and presented intricately woven tale. The interaction between Dawn and Alex, and theirs with the other characters and agencies is great. Update soon please.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [12 Jan 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This is an amazing story with a wonderful depth of plot, great characterization and filled with lots of lovely details.
Please consider finishing this story. I know that it's often hard to come back to a story that was abandoned, but I think if you re-read what you wrote that you will impress yourself. (It really is *that* good a story) and maybe even inspire yourself to continue with it. There is so much more of this story just waiting to be written: the battle with Caleb, Section's arrival in SunnyD, Buffy's downward spiral, the SITs, Alex's plan for the SGC - not to mention the assault on the First!
I can only hope you do choose to start writing this again.
Scorpio
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [5 Aug 06] • Rating [10 out of 10]
nerfherder
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