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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written introduction, full of possibilities.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [28 Apr 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
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So John is married to Dawn in the future. Am I correct.
And complete what do you mean complete. Please consider an sequel.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [6 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from manic
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Ok. I really enjoyed the fic. Buffy of all people could understand what John is going through. But I was confused by the last part. In order for John to have a sister-in-law, he has to have a sibling...

Anyway, thanks for sharing! Ever think of doing SCC and SG1? I think mini!Jack and John Conner are very similar.
Review By [manic] • Date [26 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TroubledFred
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You got to continue this, I think it was make for such a interesting plot. Its very original!
Review By [TroubledFred] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
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Holy shneikes! I totally got sucker punched at the end...your brief hint made me suspect Derek might just know her, then you threw a wrench in the works. Bravo!
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spikeismine
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Complete?! But I want to know more. I hate cliffhangers.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [12 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DemonChildeKyra
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Oh my gods! That was great! And the reference to John/Dawn at the end was great! Please say there's a sequel or companion piece to this!!! *goes to look*

~ Kyra
Review By [DemonChildeKyra] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from majbitca
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Loved the story. Very well written and I really enjoyed the direction it was heading in. Wouldn't be opposed to more in this series.
Review By [majbitca] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from winterd
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I liked this. It was very well written and stayed right in character. Very good job.

Now I want to see more. Will there be more? Please say there will be more. *puppy-dog eyes* :P
Review By [winterd] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Kiwikatipo
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That was a superb short story, writing tight, description excellent.

I liked how naughty Buffy reacted to her first sight of Derek and then decided he was a rude s.o.b.

The twist in the tale was okay, but I would have been just as happy with Buiffy deciding 'she'd be back'
Review By [(Past Donor)Kiwikatipo] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Waverly
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oh, please continue, that was excellent!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Oh no you don't! You can't stop there. I demand to have more of this story! Please? Besides being a great setup, you actually made laugh out loud with some of the lines. I epecially liked: "The flop in the chair and the deep, put upon sigh confirmed it. Some things were always constant; death, taxes and the fact that teenaged girls were confrontational and teenaged boys were always, without fail, sullen." I laughed again as I just reread it.
Comments from author:
LOL I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've left it at a place where I can, if I so choose, do more with it.

I'm glad you liked that line. I was thinking about this teenager we know when I was writing and how no matter WHAT is going on, he's always got this pouty, put upon look on his face and I was like... THAT'S JOHN! :-) I think that's probably one of my favorite sentences I have ever written... LOL
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AngelaM
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Neat little start, so is this implying that Dawn Summers becomes Mrs. Conners?
Review By [AngelaM] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SlowMercury
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I enjoyed this story very much, and I'd love to read more if you ever get the urge to write it. For example, I'd love to see what happened if John ever actually Googled Buffy - I'd imagine he'd get a lot of hits from demonic sites, but he might also learn that she really did burn down that gym. And it'd be kinda cool/funny if the way he wound up meeting his future bride was through his bride's older sister trying to shrink his head.

Finally, there aren't enough fics about Buffy as a guidance counselor. This was really nice.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Arekanderu
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Oh i wish you put Cameron's interview with Buffy as well. Now that would have been hilarious. Still great fic
Review By [Arekanderu] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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