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Review of chapter "Life at the Dursleys" from Swordstress
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I really enjoyed this. You make Buffy fit in, which can be hard to do. I love the relationship between her and Harry--it's very sweet. :)

Also, I like how you make sure that Buffy doesn't become the central character and pushes all the characters aside. It's good that certain things are kept separate, like Harry doing Quidditch first year, etc. It shows they're not the same person, and that Harry is still special. :)
Review By [Swordstress] • Date [26 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Year" from Morgomir
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Love it. One of the better versions. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of the Year" from Lycan
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I'm not an overly huge fan of Buffy/Harry Potter crossovers, but occasionally I do find an exception. This, I'm glad to say, is one of the better ones, and I'm glad I decided to read it.
I hope you continue to write the rest of the series' soon, I can't wait to see what's in store next :D
Review By [Lycan] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of the Year" from soulfulone
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this was a really lovely story, you blended Buffy in rather seamlessly!! i look forward to rerading your version of the series with the Potter twins....brilliant job!
Review By [soulfulone] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of the Year" from Dragonelf
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Nice little story.

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [3 Nov 08] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The End of the Year" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
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I like how close their relationship is as brother and sister. I can't help wondering if Buffy will be called as the Slayer in one of the future stories?
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The End of the Year" from Ben
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Well, the only big problem I have with this is that in Season Four, Buffy said her astrological sign was "Pisces on the Cusp of Aquarius."
The birthday episodes all seem to agree with this statement, While Mr. Potter's falls on July 31.

Personally, I think that Dawn would work better as her birthday's much closer, but that's just me. YMMV.
Review By [Ben] • Date [2 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day of Lessons prt 2" from VillageOrchid
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Actually I had a hard time following the visual with Buffy and Neville. Otherwise okay storytelling, but you're going over old ground for now and not adding much.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Day of Lesson prt 1" from VillageOrchid
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Interesting AU elements going on here. Looking of forward to seeing where small changes will lead to larger differences.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hogwarts Express" from VillageOrchid
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I like how you added in a period of psychological and cultural adjustment to twins ...not sure again if this alternate reality or a twisted continuity due to a wish or a "reward."
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diagon Alley" from VillageOrchid
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I like how you are trying to show that each twin has a different voice and different character traits.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life at the Dursleys" from VillageOrchid
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I like the telepathic connection... but the explanation... is it alternate reality or the result of a wish?? If it is alternate reality, I probably won't enjoy it as much as the tension of figuring out what brought Buffy there.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Getting Sorted" from AllenPitt
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one has to wonder if Buffy will get called as the slayer during year 5.....but that's a long way off I suppose.
Staying with the Giles' --does that mean they don't go back to the Dursleys in the summer?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diagon Alley" from (Current Donor)liability
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I like the way this story is going, and look forward to seeing it develop.

Just so you know there are a few non British references in there but it doesn't effect the story.
Review By [(Current Donor)liability] • Date [1 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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