Review of chapter "Happy Birthday Harry and Buffy" from Swordstress
Review:
I really enjoyed reading this one, too. I like how closely you are sticking to the story, but still making enough changes to make it interesting. I'm also glad you haven't made Buffy a Mary Sue, like how she gets sick before Harry. Flaws make her character more real. So good job! :)
Anyway, I'm off to read the Potter Twins' latest adventure!
Review By [Swordstress] • Date [26 May 09] • Not Rated
Still loving the story so far. I give this chapter a nine because it's great but you should probably read or watch the second one again as mandrake, or mandragora is for returning people who have been /petrified/ to their original state, not transfigured. I hope you don't think I'm being judgemental, its just, if you name a part in any one of them other than the seventh book, I could probably tell you what's going on along with the lines being said...*sigh* I just have too much time on my hands. Now I'm back off to finish reading!
Review By [AshDawnSoulmates] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Even though not much is changing I am really enjoying reading this. I do really like the things you have changed/added. I am looking forward to reading the next year. I keep waiting for Buffy to be called, for a moment there I thought maybe she was being called in a very flashy way, though Godric Griffindor is pretty cool too.
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [3 Nov 08] • Not Rated