Not bad, but I wish you'd thrown Cole in their. Cole was always one of my favorite characters in the show Charmed. Sure towards the end he got bad and confusing but you de-aged a lot of them, why not have some way for him and Phoebe to get together? The whole love guy thing annoyed me in the series it felt like he was shoved down your throat ya know?
anyway, it's your story and it's decent, no action or anything but for a kind of fluffy piece it wasn't bad.
Comments from author:
Cole is not my favorite character so I usually just let him rest. And it's just supposed to be fluff so I'm glad you think it wasn't bad.
Review By [TTrunks] • Date [15 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Lovely. Just lovely. The final episode gave a warm "and they lived happily ever after" feeling. You captured that quite well.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I couldn't quite decide how to end it and I finally decided to take a page out of the official writers' book and make it that happy ever after feeling.
Review By [kayron] • Date [7 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I loved the beauty and the simplicity of this story. I loved the connection of the characters and the joy that became their lives. I love that Tara and Willow were reunited and that Buffy ended up with Wyatt. That Anya and Xander ended back up together.
Thank you; Calia
Comments from author:
You're very welcome. Willow, Buffy, and Anya came out of left field when I was writing the ending and they just seemed to *fit*. So I left them.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
It does sorta echo the final Charmed episode.. I got that same feeling.. I liked it.. I would've liked it better if it were longer but I still like it lots =)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it a lot. The last episode of Charmed was one of my favorites and how they ended it just seemed fitting to echo in this story since I basically wanted to give them Charmed lives.
Review By [WhenNightFalls] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Although I was a bit dubious when I started to read, I found that I really enjoyed this, the idea of them all being cute magical kids was just...well...cute. I thought Xander freezing Spike was cool and the way Tara helped him to release it. I'd love to hear more of their exploits, it must of been strange for xan growing up with those abilities. And how did the reincarnation of Buffy and Willow affect his possession/ghost chats. The epilogue was very conclusive but my only gripe is that it was too soon lol. Of course, you might have thoroughly finished the story off...but there are always spin offs. *grins evily*
great job, I don't know where you get your ideas from. nate
Comments from author:
I was dubious when I started writing it, so I'm glad we were both surprised. And I wanted them cute. 'Cause seriously, they'd make some awesomely cute little kids. Xander freezing Spike was a spur of the moment decision that turned out really well. And Tara knows all about anxiety, so she'd know how to handle something like that.
Buffy and Willow, after they were reincarnated, weren't around for the ghostly chats or possessions. Mostly, that was Giles and Joyce, who kept track of Xander, Buffy, Willow, and Anya as they lived their next life.
I can't handle another series at the moment. I am, however, almost tempted to write a drabble collection about them. Nothing too serious or strenous, but we'll see.
Review By [AzureChaos] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]