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Review of chapter "Year One: Executioner" from SnakeofMedusa
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“You should probably be made aware, then that the Dark Lord’s true name is Tom Marvollo Riddle,” Voldemort said.

Might wanna go back and fix that sometime.

Great story, love Cordy's baby collection!
Comments from author:
You know, sadly, it took me a moment to figure out why that was reading wrong. Jeez. I'll fix it when I can.

Glad you like and don't they rock?!
Review By [SnakeofMedusa] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Year Eleven: Time to Begin" from jgoodman
Review:
good story
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [29 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Year Eleven: Time to Begin" from TouchoftheWind
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Brilliant! -bows before your brilliance-
Comments from author:
-curtsies- Thank you.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Year One: Executioner" from Angelfirenze
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I've noticed there's no buildup here -- we just go from one scene very quickly to the next without any reprieve in between. This is relatively fine during a set of chapter, but within the same one, it's rather jarring.

Not to mention, Cordy's seeming to turn into some sort of superwoman here and since that didn't happen until Jasmine possessed her, which won't happen here, I'm at a loss as to why she's so capable and flawless all of a sudden.

Oh, but see -- that's the thing! The plot is amazing and I really think I'll be finishing this story because it's addictive! Everything else really turns into these speed bumps that sort of trip you up, but then you floor it again and you forget all about them!

Very few writers can accomplish something like that.
Comments from author:
I'm going to assume that this story just wasn't your cup of tea. I'm sorry to hear that.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [24 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Year One: Jury" from Angelfirenze
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Well, you certainly have unabashed love for Cordelia, don't you? *waves off* There are some things in this that are downright implausible -- mannerisms, not actions -- but I'm willing to suspend my disbelief.

Also, that 'little hammer' is called a gavel. *nods*
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "AN/Prologue" from Angelfirenze
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Some of it I don't agree with, most of it I love, all of it hilarious so I'll definitely just go with it and resign myself to enjoying this walk on the wishful thinking side of season five/six, three/four. Bravo for this imaginative -- even for a crossover -- set up. And hooray, especially, for including both Harry and Neville in the awesomeness. I can only hope they still manage to meet Luna at some point as she's my other favorite character. *nods*
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Year Eleven: Time to Begin" from winnie
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What a delightful story, so much fun. Looking forward to the next one.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [winnie] • Date [15 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Year Eleven: Time to Begin" from Morgomir
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Great story. I'll start reading the sequel immediately. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Awesome. Hope you enjoy.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue: Year Eleven: Time to Begin" from spring
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Oh man I haven't got the words for how much I love this wonderful fic. Many a time you had me laughing so thank you so much. This is an excellent fic and I am very eager to read the next part in this series.
Comments from author:
Since this is one of my favorite fics that I've written, I sort of get giddy when people decide they like it. It's just, it's so unabashedly crack!tastic. So, I'm glad you find it funny.
Review By [spring] • Date [3 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Year Eight: Veni" from PrincessTai
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Faith's pregnant too?
And I love how Dawn wraps Ollivander around her finger. She has joined the unique status of Luna and she didn't even need to be locked ina dungeon.

Nice to see that Ollie and Marcie still are't bosom buddies.
Comments from author:
Faith's not pregnant here. She's just sharing the joy of the threesome, is all.

And Dawn would be a seriously cute little kid. Ollivander is prepared for a lot of things but a Summers-Giles girl is not one of them.

Oliver and Marcus have their disagreements and rows like any friends. And then there's Quidditch. Which you will see later.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Year Five: Learn" from PrincessTai
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I love how Snape's all smug over what Marcus knows. And I love how Marcus loves his family. Hmm, was Bill there when Rona was? *Wriggles brows* And I love how she hugged him. I mean I know they are family but it's still cool to see, and to think that if a Marcus Flint raised by his parents and a potential slayer Rona had met, they'da probably tried to kill each other .. or shag. Not cuddle with affection and protection.

The entire seen between Snape and Buff was just classic, so good. And Oz's cackling so helped clinch it. I love her words, I could so hear that dangerous tone in my head. Fear the slayer Mr. Needs Soap! I adore Snape, but seeing him get smacked down is still so fun!

>>>One would think he’d never been struck by a woman with a baby strapped to her chest before.
LMAO! Now that's my own cackle *bvwg*

Hm. They got schooled. Very pleasent.
Comments from author:
Marcus was six when he was brought to the Hyperion. He still sort of remembers life before and he knows he's got it better now. Hmmm, are you trying to get me to spill? As for the hugging, Rona's officially found herself as the older sister to some of the craziest kids on the planet. I like to think she enjoys it.

Oz loves that Buffy sticks up for Lycanthropes. And, most of the time, Snape's one of my good guys. He just, he didn't want to do that with this story. So he got smacked. Let's see if he got some sense knocked into him.

One of my favorite lines.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Year Five: Laugh" from PrincessTai
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Whoa!? All FOUR of them? Huh. That's not at all bad. And it ... very weirdly fits. Fred/Anya. Gunn/Wes, as do the other possible versions, so all four of them actually can work as a group and not just a bunch of different pairings and the other one.

So, Joyce IS Grammy. Poor Giles. He so knows he loves it, even though it probably DOES irritate him a bit.

I so loved the Marcus perspective :-)
Comments from author:
Yes! All four! Isn't it grand!

If G-Man irritates him, you know Grampy does.

And Marcus. He's such and aggrivated, yet sweet kid. Very pre-teen angsty.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Year Five: Live" from PrincessTai
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Pregnant Grandmother? Who? Joyce? I can't think of who that can be since both Dru and Darla are dead. And poor Marcus knows not how much more weird it'll be with Mom, Da, and Aunty Faith :-D He's a really good kid. Can see he still has a bit of that Flint foul temper, and yes for braces! LOL Nice that the temper mellowed out with some good love. Wow, Marcus Flint friends with Percy from the get go. Weird. And for all Cordy's sass, I always DID picture as a mother who cried like someone died when her kids parted.
Comments from author:
Marcus is a good kid. He's just got a temper on him and a need to brood. Everybody blames it on Angel. And, yeah, Cordy is the type to cry when her littles leave the nest.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Year Three: Snails" from PrincessTai
Review:
LOL I love Xander's cuddle theory. It reminds me of something I read dawn said in an ff, I think it was one of sevangel's, if she stopped talking to all the people who had tried to kill her she'd have no friends and family left. So very true.
-- It was the cuddle instinct. Upset woman equaled cuddles for him. He’d been trained well.
Aww, Xander and Dru! (cute coupling possiblities, but still rocking as buddies).

My first thought was Dru as a mum, but oh, Dru. I think that was so like her. When she gets an idea in her head ... and I always imagined that a souled Dru would have such a BIG heart.

Gah! I really love your characterization. Naricissa is just how I picture she should be, cool as a cucumber and faster with a wand. Sirius, I adore happy and rougish Sirius. And Remus, I always felt thathe had the potential for a subtle british humor that was more on point that Wes' yet more lighter and playful that Giles.


And I have to agree on Spike, on two for one. LOL. And that scene, so sets their relatioship in my head. Was so Buffy, so them, Sirius with his smart comment, Remus being Remus by giving the run down and then being all night-night now, and being carried away by a patiently (or not so?) waiting Buffy.

Can't wait for Nico and the rest to come along!
Comments from author:
Yes to the cuddle theory. It's been awhile since I've really read sevangel's stuff so it might have sank into my brain and fermented but I don't think it's a complete copy of her stuff, so. There we go. Xander is just a very cuddleable guy.

I'm glad you like my characterization.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Year Three: Snakes" from PrincessTai
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Yes! That is going to take a headache. But I love it. All those kids, developing their quirks and personalities. Going to be fun. How they tie ito each other and each adult. How they all adore Sirius, How Connor is obviously nuts and should be kept from sugar, how Millie is Daddy's little girl. LOL. Aww and mother hen spikey all protective of little nevvy. Who is her Wicked Light? Cordy or Spike?

Amy's mad protective of those kids. But I get it. I think. Being manipulated by dark magic since she was a kid, don't think she'd want it happening to one of 'hers' let alone two of them.
Comments from author:
Sirius still usually acts like a big kid. And Connor. Fast metabolism. NO SUGAR! And I was pretty sure that any daughter of Xander's was going to be a daddy's girl. Spike's protective of all the little kids. Dru's Wicked Light is Spike.

Anybody messing with kids trips Amy up.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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