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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Genuka
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Great rendition and a wonderful story.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [3 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from spring
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I love this fic, I think it's wonderful. Please continue to write fics of this calaber. I really like the way that you did the relashionships between the couples.
Review By [spring] • Date [19 Feb 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from purrfus
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Overall this is a very good story. The ending was a little rushed compared to the rest, and seemed somewhat anti-climatic.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [5 Feb 07] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Students Arrival" from purrfus
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The images are priceless. Willow 2, Slytherins 0.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [5 Feb 07] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Appearances" from purrfus
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Snape doesn't like her? So his usually nervy self cuz anybody else woulda fried him by now what with the kidnapping and all.
Review By [purrfus] • Date [5 Feb 07] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Arjai
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Correct me if I'm wrong, this was supposed to be longer. Don't get me wrong it was an excellent tale. The last few chapters seemed to rush to the end rather quickly, though. Keep up the good work. All in all it was a very well written tale.
Review By [Arjai] • Date [12 May 06] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Dragonlove
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This was a great story. I stayed up all night to finish it. I loved how you brought Fred into the story. She really is underused in the fanfiction world. I think the way you used the 'ajoining' spell worked wonderful in the HP world. I don't normally like stories that put Willow and Snape together, but yours works pretty well. Not too sure about the the Faith and Remus thing though. I really can't see Faith staying with someone as simple and easy going as him. But it worked fairly well in your story. I have always wondered why JKR doesn't just have her characters breaking each others wands. I am glad that you brought the subject up and put it to good use. Hope to see you write more stories. You did a great job with this one.
Review By [Dragonlove] • Date [30 Dec 05] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of story "The Missing Headmaster" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Okay, I've read this story for the third time, and gotta say: still lovin' it! I always enjoy a story where the characters are so real in some situations that I actually find myself sighing or laughing out loud (much to the annoyance of my housemates!).

--L. Martin
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [10 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Missing Headmaster" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Great story! I actually found it on Dark Redemption, but they only had the first chapter up, so I searched here, hoping to find it complete, or at least further along, and bingo, there it was.

Your story moved at quite a clip, which isn't necessarily a bad thing, but the relationships could have used more detail (and I'm not talking about smut, either), more 'getting to know you' time.

All in all, it was an entertaining story and fairly original. I mean, who else has ever written 'Dumbledore gets captured by Voldemort?' I've never seen it done before, crossover or otherwise, and read way more fanfiction than is probably healthy.

Thanks for writing!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [1 Jan 04] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Missing Headmaster" from Anonymous Reviewer
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A sweet ending to a plot worthy of any Doctor Who adventure, and certainly a worthy literary version of a Buffy-verse adventure.
Still a few typos in your published chapters, and I would have liked a little more description and played out characterization,
perhaps in additional scenes, of the other Buffy-verse characters while they were visiting (Weseley, Lorne, and Giles in particular).
Still that's what "missing scenes" fic is for, right? (grin) Certainly quite enjoyable enough that I will be checking out some of your other stories.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Missing Headmaster" from Anonymous Reviewer
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After Chapter 20 - lots of good stuff, the romance element proceeding but not at super-speed, which is cool to see in a story.
Loved Andrew's comment about not realizing that Giles had a first name. Glad you included Lorne.
I'd like to see him be especially charming with McGonnical.
Hope you address the fact that Andrew has a magically affinitiy for summonings.
Know you've already finished the story, but feeling bubly and full of comments.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Missing Headmaster" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Shannon, I]m just posting you a quick review -
I]ve read the first 13 chapters and have enjoyed how you are developing
the plot and the characters. For a while I thought it might even be posible
that Dumbledor had been on vacation somewhere and set this whole thing
up for Willow and Snape (grin) to find each other.
There]s that and then the rest of your plotting, and character development, which I am enjoying.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Dec 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Missing Headmaster" from Anonymous Reviewer
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that was a good story with an excellent ending....I am curious...where was the romance between fred and charlie, and Willow and Snape? I was expecting to find it in the epilouge....Great story anyway...i really liked it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [23 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Missing Headmaster" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I enjoyed your story and the solution -- using the adjoining spell -- worked very well. Thanks for the epilogue to tie up some of the loose ends. I was glad you showed Faith being responsible, not wanting to leave Buffy with all the slayer-training. If you ever decide to do a sequel of some sort, showing more of these 'ships, I'd look forward to reading it.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [22 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "The Missing Headmaster" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Wow! That was an excellent story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [22 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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