Nice story it sad that you did not continue it. However it has the potential for a sequel. Imena really I would love Xander to kind a walk on in. lol.

Lisa

Well, shoot! Thanks for the payoff! At least you ended it and didn't leave it flapping about.

Don't be discouraged. Your hit count will always be bigger than your review count. It's just the way of things.

Loverly story dear.

I dedicated the chapter to you, actually, since you called me a "tease." I had to dedicate the payoff to you...:)

I know I shouldn't get discouraged. It's more like I get inspired when people review. Their feedback often prompts characters to start talking in my brain and then I have to get it out onto paper.

Thank you very much - I do appreciate your kind words.

It's a shame that you're ending this story. 2 recommendations? That's better than what a lot of stories rate, especially when you compare that to the small number of reviews you've gotten. Write the story because *you* enjoy it, not because you hope someone else will. I wouldn't say that if it was your actual job, but since you can't make money off of it anyway, write for *your* pleasure. There are many thousands of stories out there. Who knows, but maybe by the time you get 2 more chapters down, you'll find another dozen people tracking the story, another dozen reviews, and another recommendation or two. That's my two cents, for what it's worth.

Thank you for your kind words. I do appreciate them and I am leaning toward writing at least an epilogue, but it has to wait until I start hearing the dialogue bouncing around in my head.

Thank you again!

Guess a lot of people seem to be finding this story today. Great story, I really love the S1W being a typo thing. Would have loved to see more but tht was a nice non cliffhangy place to leave it.

I might write an epilogue because I feel like I left a few things open that I would like wrapped up, but we'll see...

I'm glad you enjoyed - I liked the "typo" thing myself. It seemed like a good entrypoint into the world for them.

Thank you for reading & reviewing!

this was a really original story, I just came across it today

don't feel glum you didn't get many readers, sometimes your best work as a fanfiction writer is not what most people want to read, so when people do like youir stuff it just makes it sweeter.

but on the good side you finished the story, it was an okay ending and if you hadn't have put in the author's note I never would haved realised that point wasn't where you originally chose to end it.

Thank you for your pep talk. I really enjoyed writing this story, and if something else pops into my head to continue it, I'd certainly re-open the story because I did feel like I had more to accomplish. The words just don't want to come out, so I'll leave it as it is for now...

I usually don't like to end a story with sex because I don't think that should be the end, but the beginning. I might need to write an epilogue...:)

Thank you again - you brightened my day!

I just found this story, and I especially enjoyed the character interactions. This sounded just like Alex.

I'm glad you enjoyed! I really liked Alec and felt so bad for him that he didn't think he could have anything good in his life...

Thank you for reading & reviewing!

That was fun! And a hell of a tease.

So sorry about the "tease." Hopefully, the next chapter will satisfy a little bit of that anguish...

Thank you for reading & reviewing!

Interesting. I like the approach this story is taking so far

Thank you - I hope you continue to enjoy. The next chapter has just been posted.

Awesome start! I'm tracking this one.

Most appreciated...hopefully future chapters will live up to expectations!

Thank you for reading & reviewing!

Great job very entertaining.

Thank you...

Good start. Intriguing start, don't think I've seen this sort of premise. Somewhat similar perhaps, but not the same.

So is Asha Xander's daughter or one of the other Scoobies? Or is this something we have to wait and see to find out?

Your question has been answered - in the chapter I just posted!

Thank you for reading & reviewing!