Very nice!!!

Thanks!

This was a great story- I love how protective Spike was over Connor and Dawn. It was great!

Thanks. It was a weird story to write, I remember that much. Glad you liked it.

I would really love to see a sequel to this piece. It has so many wonderful possibilies.

And I, honestly, would love to write it. It's just, every time I start picking at it, nothing happens. I'll keep trying, though.

I would love to know what happens next, in dare I say it a sequel.

I want to write a sequel but I'm a little busy trying to finish up a few WIP and I just don't have the time to try to channel that kind of angst. For Dawn is an angsty one in this one. I have no idea why.

please keep on going with this story ... just found it ...and i gotta say ... BLOODY BRILLIANT....please please update

There will, eventually, be a sequel. Eventually being the operative word. I'm glad you like it, though.

Big. Damn. Hero. Had Zoe say it. Did he think it was all for fun? :-P

He doesn't quite understand. Not yet, anyway.

So she really was. Thought she was going to do it all on the ship, with the comment that their cargo was going to take up a lot of space.

Yeah, they're coming back. I just, erm, have to write that part. But, no, magic is meant to be done on the ground not surrounded by a lot of metal and wiring that could be affected by the magic they're calling down.

>>That was after the fifty years it had taken her to notice that he was actually flirting with her, much to his father’s dismay.

*Snickers* Oh, Angel and his dismay and his inablity to stuff it. I love his dismay. He does that frowny sighy, then resigned face. It's a transition. It's so him. No one else can do it as well :-D

>>>Connor, even after five hundred years, had no more patience than the day he was born.

*Wide grin*

>>his two little rarities
Awww, Mama Spike! *bg*


>>Mal was too like her sister, for all that he looked like Caleb. Zoe had her mother’s calm and strength. The pilot was the Whelp. Pretty Kaylee was Red. Simon had Giles’s class and smarts and most of Wesley’s lack of people skills. When the Companion walked in, Spike wanted to start hurling things about. Minus the profession and the stone cold bitchitude, she was Cordelia, all class.

I never really thought about it that way, but yeah. And it made me sniffle. I had to do some thinking on Zoe, Wash is always the easiest, Mal CAN be so like Buffy. Simon hits me Wes, with Giles sarcasm, and that Wes-ness when Wesley was in his element. Inara, Cordy, not afraid to step up to the champion and tell them they're an idiot all the while reminding them of their human side. But I am still a bit iffy with Zoe. I think Kay has a touch of Tara as well. All warmth and heart, she hasn't gotten quite as mother earthy if ever, but there is something there. Book's more Giles for me :-D


Only books? I thought it was them for reals *Sighs*

I just thought it was funny that it took her 50 years to notice. Because Connor? Not really known for his subtlety. And that Angel noticed before Dawn. But, yeah, Angel would have serious problems because his son. And Buffy's sister. O_o

It's true! Connor will never be patient. Think of his fast metabolism. That sort of precludes patience. Right? That might only make sense to me. *shrugs*

Well, Angel keeps doing the Papa thing so they need a Mama.

On Zoe = Joyce: Remember, Joyce could be expected to stand up for hers. She whacked Spike over the head with an ax the first time she met him. Kaylee's pre-magic Willow to me. Because Willow could and did do the sweetness thing before she started gaining a little power.

And, yeah, only books. I *almost* went that way. But, well. You know.

I can't believe that I almost passed over this one!

>>>This is Connor Darling and Lyrie Wyndham. Our other associates are William Gunn
Out of all them, these three struck me the most. I'm a little surprised by William Gunn but he did like his Chuck :-P Respected him even. It was't the first one I woulda thought but like the others, it does work.

It's okay. It's just an 6 chapter ditty in a small fandom. Well, smallish.

It's been 500 years. I'm pretty sure they've tried every combination on their names possible. But, yeah, Spike liked his Gunn.

wow.
that was awesome.
Is there going to be anymore???

Probably.

I liked the story but it felt incomplete like there should be more to it.

I think there's going to be a sequel. I think there was a bigger purpose than just what we were seeing.

oxoxoxo Very well done. I think they succeeded and things are going to change very soon.

Thank you. And we'll see.

Another well written story, but it seems incomplete.

There's a couple of thoughts floating around with this story. I might have to come back to it. Because it doesn't quite feel finished to me, either.

Oh I *liked* this... Really hoping you've got a sequel gnawing at your forebrain :)

I'm glad you like this.

And I've certainly got *something* gnawing on my forebrain.;)~

Nice little story, Are you going to do more?

Maybe...