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Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from csad
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Oh boy, for a series of ficlets, this is quite great. Loved it. Especially that last one. Xander the civilian not even fazed by the Wraith. And the garroted Wraith turning to black goo just has that element of awesome to it. I can just imagine the faces of Sheppard's team at that. :D

Of course the Xander/Rodney bit is as cute as it is hilarious as well. I really loved how you wrote that particular courtship in this series of ficlets.

Only wish you'd turn this into a novel-length story. Because, in actual fact, it would be quite awesome to read a story where the Wraith are attacking Atlantis, and Xander calls for a Slayer and Witch army back-up. If for no other reason than it would be hilariously creep the Lanteans out how the girls so casually kill Wraith without looking like they're so much as straining doing it, all the while quipping fashion tips and complaints. And obviously I'm all in favour of hilarity in all its forms.

Edit: Oops. Just now realized how old the fic is and thus not likely to get updated. Too bad.
Review By [csad] • Date [25 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from SilentAddiction
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Hee! Yay.
Review By [SilentAddiction] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from Geyer
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I really like this series. I hope your muse brings you back to it. We really need more Rodney/Xander stories and you've provided this wonderful foreshadowing of a future dire situation. I'm looking forward to a hypothetical future installment where the hypothetical reinforcements are needed.
Review By [Geyer] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from eriktheviking
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Great writing, hypothetically that is.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [16 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from Neverwillmini
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Was just rereading some stories and wanted to comment in case I hadn't earler. I loved the 'Eww, I've got Wraith on my shoes' moment in the last story, and after reading this one, I'm 1) wondering exactly how many and what type of weapons he has stashed around the place, 2) feeling that John is going to want to see Xander spar - maybe with Teyla, and 3) kinda wanting to see the reinforcements arrive (without a spaceship) and the jaws drop over all the children running around and killing Wraith.

[crossing my fingers and hoping for more to this series...]
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [14 Oct 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from Califaction
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Awesome! Hehehe. I love Xander being all connected-guy and cool-guy. He's so like, "Haha, I've faced scarier things than you in my sleep...literally...*cough*FirstSlayer*cough*" I also liked your assessment of Shepard's character and reaction to this civilian suddenly becoming a dangerous black-op-type person. Also, "otherwise he wouldn't be very handy" made me grin so widely! The "hypothetically speaking" talk was made of pure and utter awesome. I love it when people talk hypothetically. And Xander's use of garrot wire ruled! Garrot wire is under-rated in the world of awesome weapons--it's true that most things can't survive getting their heads cut off. I also feel like there's been a definite improvement in your writing style from the first fic in this series to this latest one, which is neat. ^_^
This fic was really fun! Will there be more? It'd be cool to see some more Xander/Rodney interaction. If, however, the Muse has left you--what's been written is great. Thanks for writing and posting!
Comments from author:
There will, in all likelihood, be more stories in this series. Whenever my Muse starts to wander away from my other stories but I still have the writing bug, I do another "Xander in Atlantis" fic. More Xander/Rodney interaction you say? Hmmm, I think that can be arranged.
Review By [Califaction] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from Neverwillmini
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He stood up and headed for the door, but before he opened it he said, “Dr. Weir? Just one more thing. If Atlantis is ever in dire need of reinforcements, I can get you back-up, anytime. Hypothetically speaking.”

I'd love to see that hypothetical situation come up and the Slayers and Witches come storming to to save the city. I'd also love to see an outed Xander sparing with Ronon now (with blades) and scaring the Marines. (Until they see little girls swinging around some DAMN big swords and knives messily slaughtering Wraith in the city while cheerfully discussing the latest chick flick/shoe sale/fashion/homework/pop idol/etc. Maybe Xander can do some solo katas with his BIG battleax.)
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [21 May 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from spacey
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i'm sad this is the last one. it's a great little series
Review By [spacey] • Date [17 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from Starshine
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I just re-read this series and it was as funny as the last time. Sorry I couldn't review back then. Anyway these short stories are really funny and in character. i hope you'll update soon with a few more. F. ex how Willow and Buffy manage to give Rodney a shovel speech or Xander having to explain Dawn accidentally falling through a portal in the gate room or actually entering through the Stargate. Anyway. I hope these bunnies will be of help in writing more.
Review By [Starshine] • Date [24 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from Tiki
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Or maybe I'm a dumbass who doesn't read author notes!

Okay you wrote more! And now I'm going to read them!
Comments from author:
Ha! Go have fun, and thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Tiki] • Date [24 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from Tiki
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I absolutely love this. That you added slash, that you had Sheppard and Weir dumbfounded about Xander, that you added a new way to kill the Wraith, and I really loved the hypotheticals. It was so good that I really wish you write more!

Thanks for writing!
Review By [Tiki] • Date [24 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from narukyu
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You win at life. :D
I can't believe I didn't read this series before! It's short, but SO good.
Well done!
Comments from author:
Thank you, glad you decided to read the series and that you enjoyed it so much. :)
Review By [narukyu] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from Miststalker
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I want to read more of these ficlets!
Comments from author:
That sentence epitomizes encouragement. Thank you!
Review By [Miststalker] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from manic
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This was hilarious. I loved, too, that it was longer. Xander garroting a Wraith just cracked me up! LOL! I loved how Xander handled his interrogation. Loved the characterizations of everyone involved. Thanks so much for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thanks. That scene was really fun to write and I'm happy you had fun reading it and that you like the characterizations.
Review By [manic] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hypothetical Relations" from Intermundia
Review:
Very cute! Good ending. I like it.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [Intermundia] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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