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Review of chapter "Pride" from darkKnight
Review:
Well done! I do not recall any other using that particular movie.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you like it.
Review By [darkKnight] • Date [28 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pride" from Tamda
Review:
Never read Devil's Advocate, but I am loving this.

It's like my belief that Jesus Christ and then all splintered Judao-Christian Society is the best tool the evils ever pulled on the world. Ahh what amazing chaos a single man wreaked. It's inspiring.

The devil you know, may not be known as a devil, but as your friend. :) Gods but I love it.
Comments from author:
Your very welcome. It's a very good movie.
Review By [Tamda] • Date [17 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pride" from CPTSkip
Review:
You caught my interest. I wonder if Xander has really gone over to the Dark Side or if he is playing a deeper game. Please write more as I'd like to find out.
Comments from author:
Maybe he is....... :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pride" from slytherinwithwings
Review:
I don't know that I understand a bit of it, but I am intrigued. Please continue.
FlyingSnake
Comments from author:
Just rent The Devil's Advocate with Al Pacino and Keanu Reeves. It's worth it.
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pride" from angelus
Review:
brilliant I haven't seen Devil's Advocate in awhile though but this makes me want to
Comments from author:
Thanks. I enjoyed Al Pacino's portrayal a great deal.
Review By [angelus] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pride" from silvergaurd
Review:
Great new chapter! Can't wait to see more soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pride" from neverwill
Review:
It'll be interesting to see an evil Xander - or is he a triple agent whose working more closely with the PTB's for the greater good (even if some of the champions have to fall to evil for their plan to work)?
Comments from author:
Questions, questions. You'll see.
Review By [neverwill] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pride" from WolfWriter
Review:
Nice. Very nice. A crossover with The Devil's Advocate.

With the Devil himself as Xander's dad.

Scary, my friend. Really, truly scary.

Congratulations.
Comments from author:
They do have a lot in common. Both Jokesters, both have dark hair and brown eyes, both see more than most. It freaked me out a little.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pride" from Rorschach
Review:
alright alright
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Rorschach] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pride" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Wow, that was one big setup! I can't wait to see where you take this.
Comments from author:
It will get more...interesting. Jus mostly scenes where the Xan-man tempts the others. He is the one who sees and he sees their weaknesses.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pride" from Bobboky
Review:
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Comments from author:
I'm blushing.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pride" from Hoyt
Review:
sucks.

why?

because you once again replaced xander with an OC.

make a story that doesn't replace characters with OCs PLEASE!,
Comments from author:
Oh, but you see this is what Xander would be like if Milton gained his loyalty before Buffy. A kid with abusive parents would jump at the chance for a father who cared. Xander's personality is the same and that will be shown in further chapters.

If you want to then you can write a story. Try it.
Review By [Hoyt] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Pride" from eriktheviking
Review:
Great twist, well done.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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