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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LFW
Review:
Interesting
Hope Xander gets some help
Review By [LFW] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HeatherDee
Review:
This was pretty good. I've always wondered if we'd see anyone go into depth with the psychological effects of 'the Sunnydale experience'. You know they would all be wrecks long before the seventh year.
Review By [HeatherDee] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
I really don't know what to say. Excellent story just seems a little... lame.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mieka
Review:
A very nice story. I like the different twist on Hallowe'en!
Review By [Mieka] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [16 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent job. You story did a nice job of showing us Xander's character both under fire and afterwards. I hope Sunnydale has an Alateen chapter 'cause with his experience and his parents, the boy is a walking advertisement for "alcoholism as a way of life".
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Very powerful way to bring insight into a minor character from the series. Rory had a story. The version you have created would make his behavior more human and understandable that it would have seemed from a teenage vantage point. Poor Xander seems destined for nightmares no matter what universe. It's hard to be a man. Being a superhero may have it's difficulties, but real life - that's a serious challenge.

Thanks

Blue
Comments from author:
Thanks I spent a lot of time while growing up in around VA hospitals. My father was 100% disabled from Korean war. Heard a lot of stories from those men. Learned alot about growing up from them as well.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rothos
Review:
Very good, I assume those were Marines and that the battle was on Hamburger Hill. On another note; if there are multiple realities and several Xander results then that occured multiple times as there are multiple Rory Harris'.
Comments from author:
Yep I got the ideal from Hamburger Hill.
Review By [rothos] • Date [15 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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