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Review of chapter "Spies and Subterfuge" from Sanchan
Review:
Ok,

the last part with Draco opened a lot of ways how this could continue...
Hmm... I like that Xander realized who the real heros are, even if Harry & Co. are not treated as such.
I like the relationship dynamics between Xander and Spike, which is really funny I think.

So I hope you did not abandon this story, even if 2 years of no updates are quite a hint....
But hope always dies last, so I keep on hoping.

Bye
Sanchan
Review By [Sanchan] • Date [16 Dec 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spies and Subterfuge" from calikocat
Review:
*pokes* Love it so far. Is there going to be more?
Comments from author:
Maybe some day. I do have tons of ideas I want to use.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [8 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spies and Subterfuge" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit. And it's been about eight months or so since you updated...any plans to do so?
Comments from author:
Yes, I actually am planning to update. Someday at least. I'm having a lot of problems with the next chapter. Sorry. But thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Elleria] • Date [23 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Spies and Subterfuge" from darkwwwish
Review:
i really hope to see more of this it's REALLY good. please please keep writing.
Review By [darkwwwish] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spies and Subterfuge" from valiantly
Review:
I really wish you'd have the Potter cast get over their whole "oh noes, they must be spies!" reaction. Especially Harry. I mean, it's kind of dumb of them to assume that they're spies and a possible threat when they clearly really don't know anything about their war but then again, Wizards from the Harry Potter verse aren't exactly known for their common sense (if they had any they would've used a truth potion). It's pretty much their fault that the two of them are there in the first place, so they really have no right in thinking of them as a threat and deciding to stall on helping them or w/e.

Other than that minor complaint, though, it's a good fic so far.
Review By [valiantly] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spies and Subterfuge" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Nice development beats.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Spies and Subterfuge" from silvergaurd
Review:
Great new chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting the Kiddies" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Sounds like the Scoobs will get the kids to find out a way to get them home.
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [24 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting the Kiddies" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Interesting... and Xander doesn't realize that not everyone "sees" what he can see in other people. Hasn't had that revelation or phophesey. But good for you to use it. Thanks for continuing the story.
Comments from author:
Thank you! And I intend tyo use it a lot. I always thought that was one of the more interesting aspects of Xander's character--his perceptiveness when everyone thinks he hasn't got a clue about what's going on.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Kiddies" from tonisimone
Review:
I like that xander saw harry's past.

also comparing the golden lot to the scooby gang was kinda cool. you missed harry's brooding like deadboy.

great chapter


toni
Comments from author:
I didn't even think of Harry brooding like Deadboy, but I think it would've been a bit too early for Xander to see that anyway. Do you mind if I put it in later?
Review By [tonisimone] • Date [23 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Meeting the Kiddies" from Midori
Review:
You do know that chapter 3 and 4 are the same right? The chapter was really good anyway though. Please update soon. ;D
Comments from author:
no, I didn't know that. Thank you for telling me. And thank you!
Review By [Midori] • Date [23 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Kiddies" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
Oopsa... you seem to have posted the same chapter twice. Still happy you updated, though.

(^_^)/
BEM
Comments from author:
I didn't notice that. Sorry. Thank you for telling me. I fixed it.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [23 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Kiddies" from sciphy
Review:
great new chapter. but it is there twice
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and telling me that. I must have been tired when I posted.
Review By [sciphy] • Date [23 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Meeting the Kiddies" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Good chapter. You've posted it twice though.
Comments from author:
Thank you! For both reviewing and telling me about the double posting. I didn't notice that.
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [23 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Different Conversations" from Intermundia
Review:
Awesome! Great idea! Please continue! Love it!
Review By [Intermundia] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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