This is amazing. And heartbreaking. And beautiful. the detached way with which you wrote it somehow emphasizes the pain Buffy is going through. I especially love how Jack was the one who comforted her at the end, and the way you put in the beginning of the anecdote. Thank you so much for sharing.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it!
This story kinda came from nowhere, and the more I wrote, the more I wanted to bring Jack in. I actually had the ending written well before I'd written the rest of the story and I was so happy when it fit in with the rest. LOL.
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
I loved this story. Very bittersweet and sad! I would love to see Daniel and Buffy meet. Hope you have a sequel coming. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
A sequel is rolling around in my head, but we'll see as to when/if I have time to write it. Especially with Christmas around the corner... I'm very glad you like it!
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Not Rated
This was sad and sweet, and I enjoyed the characterizations. And it is almost worse that Dawn was killed by an ordinary car accident. thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you liked it :D Thanks for reviewing!
You might want to fix this particular typo, though: "Yet the details had been itched into her memory" (instead of 'itched', that should be 'etched into her memory').
Comments from author:
I give you my very heart felt thank you over pointing that particular fault out and it's now been fixed. It's the kind of mistake that makes one go d'oh. LOL. And here I was thinking I'd found them all...
I'm very glad you liked the story!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Not Rated
One of the hardest things about losing a loved is the burden of shoulda, coulda, woulda. That really comes through in this story without making Buffy to much of a bad guy. The ending was a really nice touch.
Comments from author:
I like the ending too. It wasn't what I expected to write when I started this fic but it felt right to put in. Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated