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Review of chapter "Changes" from thegirlinquestion
Review:
you made me cry you jerk. well done :)
Review By [thegirlinquestion] • Date [10 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from serenityselena
Review:
poor Buffy ...
what a blow for her ...
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [23 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from Bunney
Review:
Great fic!!! Glad you got a Nomination :) Good Luck!!

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to tell me so as well! Brought a smile to my face :D
Review By [Bunney] • Date [11 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from AngelBlack
Review:
This is amazing. And heartbreaking. And beautiful. the detached way with which you wrote it somehow emphasizes the pain Buffy is going through.
I especially love how Jack was the one who comforted her at the end, and the way you put in the beginning of the anecdote.
Thank you so much for sharing.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it!

This story kinda came from nowhere, and the more I wrote, the more I wanted to bring Jack in. I actually had the ending written well before I'd written the rest of the story and I was so happy when it fit in with the rest. LOL.
Review By [AngelBlack] • Date [10 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from nicjphill
Review:
I loved this story. Very bittersweet and sad! I would love to see Daniel and Buffy meet. Hope you have a sequel coming. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
A sequel is rolling around in my head, but we'll see as to when/if I have time to write it. Especially with Christmas around the corner... I'm very glad you like it!
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from manic
Review:
This was sad and sweet, and I enjoyed the characterizations. And it is almost worse that Dawn was killed by an ordinary car accident. thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
I'm really glad you liked it :D Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [manic] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
Great story! Well told :)
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very moving (and believable).

You might want to fix this particular typo, though: "Yet the details had been itched into her memory" (instead of 'itched', that should be 'etched into her memory').
Comments from author:
I give you my very heart felt thank you over pointing that particular fault out and it's now been fixed. It's the kind of mistake that makes one go d'oh. LOL. And here I was thinking I'd found them all...

I'm very glad you liked the story!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Beautiful and real.

Thank you

Blue
Comments from author:
Thank YOU for reviewing. I'm very glad you liked it!
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Changes" from Keshkreature
Review:
Beautiful story. I wasn't sure how it would end, but Jack talking to her was perfect for all the right reasons.
Comments from author:
It felt right to write, even if I struggled with how to form it so that it wouldn't seem too odd. LOL. Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from NicNix
Review:
Brilliant. You made me tear up, kudos to you. I love it, please continue.
Comments from author:
I do have a nagging voice in my head about writing a follow up to this fic but we'll see :P I'm glad you liked it!
Review By [NicNix] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from KnightOwl
Review:
You can definitely feel Buffy's pain. You did a good job with the story.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from purrfus
Review:
One of the hardest things about losing a loved is the burden of shoulda, coulda, woulda. That really comes through in this story without making Buffy to much of a bad guy. The ending was a really nice touch.
Comments from author:
I like the ending too. It wasn't what I expected to write when I started this fic but it felt right to put in. Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [purrfus] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from kiwi
Review:
that was a nice story. sad and sweet. :D
Comments from author:
Thank you ;)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Changes" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
Very heart breaking. Very good. Of course it makes me want more Buffy and Jack.

Thank you for sharing your time and hard work.
Comments from author:
I want more Buffy and Jack too. LOL. Can never be too much of those two :)

Thank you for taking the time to review, it always makes my day to know that someone liked a work of mine!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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