Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ArjaiH
I haven found to many Halloween world tales that I could get interested in. So saying, living as i do in Central Florida, just about half way between Disney World/Universal Studios, and Bush Gardens, I think I may like this tale a bit more! My biggest gripe with the others is that they are written in a massively confusing oriental style. This one is currently written as memos to the members of the conclave. I hope to see the actual story line evolve with greater characterization. You have some good characters outlined, continue please.
Review By [ArjaiH
] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from queenskin
wow. LOVE. ^_^
Review By [queenskin
] • Date [19 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]