House dealing with the supernatural. Maybe having a Vamp or other demon rise from the dead. Spike would be great for that. Or maybe Illyria. Have him run into a demon that is really different internally but friendly. Or have him have to deal with a curse. It would be cool if he would end up helping out the slayers. Kind of agreeing to help them in his clinic hours. Lol.
Lisa
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [6 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Its "satisfaction brought it back" not "knowledge brought it back" great story though.
Comments from author:
really?! ah, faux pas...guess i got it from the wrong source then. *sigh* that'll teach me not to back up my research. glad you liked the story though!
Review By [enderverse] • Date [8 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Heh, sometimes even the 'good guys' have to be scary. The trick it judgeing when it's actually needed. Or make the mistake of relying on people to only fear you.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Wow. Definitely recommended. House is my favorite show at the moment (and I keep track of about ten), and I can *see* everything you wrote here happening. GREAT writing.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Quite enjoyed that, thank-you. It maybe could have been a little longer but I don't think it suffered for being the length it was.
I liked you treatment of a grown-up Willow and your characterisation of House was pretty good too. Nice twist on the 'mystery' patient plot line. I was so glad it didn't deteriorate into the farce that a lot of those type of stories do.
Well done,
DaveT.
Review By [DaveTurner] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Nice little piece you got here. One of the best stories in one chapter that I find don't need a sequel. Most people leave open threads at the end I like that you didn't. Thanks from one of your rabid readers but not so much of a reviewer.
Comments from author:
thank you. i'm glad that you liked it enough to take the time to review it!
Review By [Klyk] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Epic fail before I even get a quarter of the way into it.
How did House know who Willow was before anyone mentioned her name?
EDIT: *sigh* Sorry, I didn't realize I had to be so damnably specific with you. "As House watched disbelievingly there was a brief flash of light from Willlow's hand and the girl’s temperature and heart-rate dropped back out of the danger zone." This is before the girl yells "MISS WILLOW!" ergo House wouldn't know who the crazy redhead is, and would likely have clubbed her like a baby seal for attempting to assault a patient under his care.
Comments from author:
because the slayer in the bed yells her name!
EDIT: (fixed it) i don't mind making changes to things. i put things out here for opinions, but specifics are always nice (my mother always said i was dense;)
Review By [JoeHundredaire] • Date [25 Nov 08] • Rating [1 out of 10]