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Review of chapter "End Of The Line" from Jonathansicari
Review:
Over all, very good story.

I got, not good, the fucker's blood in my noodles.

other than that, no spelling or grammar errors leap out at me.

Jonathan
Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End Of The Line" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I think you did Xander injustice, he could handle a couple of wise-guys. Or at the least put up a fight.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End Of The Line" from ShyBob
Review:
Xander's characterization seems a bit off...of course, if it's AU, go for it. Nice descriptions and a very definite sense of impending doom make this story a definite nail biter. The aftermath, though, will be the kicker (as M.R. said).
Comments from author:
Yeah, this is more AU. Plus I don't think Jule's would react well to Xander's normal wit and sarcasm hence the lack of it. I went with Xander as I felt he'd be the most believable to get into that situation. I just couldn't see it with any of the other male characters.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End Of The Line" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Interesting - Willow's reaction might be even more interesting...
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End Of The Line" from (Moderator)Saturn
Review:
Very in character...well except for Xander borrowing money from them. But it was still an entertaining read and I'm sure Xander had a good reason to borrow that money. ;) And what can I say...I have a soft spot for anyone that is willing to kill off a main character. lol.
Comments from author:
Haha yes, you should never fear killing off a character if it's what the story requires. Most of the BtVS characters have had more than their fair share of near-misses so I don't mind seeing their luck run out sometimes. Maybe that's just the sadist in me! :S
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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