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Review of chapter "End Of The Line" from Jonathansicari
Over all, very good story.

I got, not good, the fucker's blood in my noodles.

other than that, no spelling or grammar errors leap out at me.

Review By [Jonathansicari] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "End Of The Line" from WhiteWolf
I think you did Xander injustice, he could handle a couple of wise-guys. Or at the least put up a fight.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End Of The Line" from ShyBob
Xander's characterization seems a bit off...of course, if it's AU, go for it. Nice descriptions and a very definite sense of impending doom make this story a definite nail biter. The aftermath, though, will be the kicker (as M.R. said).
Comments from author:
Yeah, this is more AU. Plus I don't think Jule's would react well to Xander's normal wit and sarcasm hence the lack of it. I went with Xander as I felt he'd be the most believable to get into that situation. I just couldn't see it with any of the other male characters.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [1 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End Of The Line" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Interesting - Willow's reaction might be even more interesting...
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "End Of The Line" from (Moderator)Saturn
Very in character...well except for Xander borrowing money from them. But it was still an entertaining read and I'm sure Xander had a good reason to borrow that money. ;) And what can I say...I have a soft spot for anyone that is willing to kill off a main character. lol.
Comments from author:
Haha yes, you should never fear killing off a character if it's what the story requires. Most of the BtVS characters have had more than their fair share of near-misses so I don't mind seeing their luck run out sometimes. Maybe that's just the sadist in me! :S
Review By [(Moderator)Saturn] • Date [30 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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