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Review of chapter "California" from daydreamer
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OK well i read it and now i understand everything! OK so it's all good i'm all good and it is now 5:50 in the morning. Goodmorning. I'm sorry i get all confused and hypery in the morning! So anyways ya i like the chapter!
Review By [daydreamer] • Date [7 Sep 04] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "California" from MaggiesMom
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This was fun. I'm really looking forward to reading the next part.
Review By [MaggiesMom] • Date [24 May 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "California" from AGentlemanOfLeisure
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A lovely piece. Surely that's not all there's going to be? It has all the hallmarks of the first chapter of a long fic - introducing the characters, old and especially the new (delightful little Joey Summers), giving us the back-history, setting the scene - and then leaving us dangling with a wicked little cliffhanger! I hope you write more. I shall keep checking back.

AGOL (aka AGentlemanOfLeisure)
Comments from author:
It's not. There's a sequal called "The Hunter's Prelude" posted here.
Review By [AGentlemanOfLeisure] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "California" from (Moderator)acs
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I've read this fic a number of times and whenever I need to be reminded that there are good, well written, character based fics out there I come back and read it again. Thanks.
Review By [(Moderator)acs] • Date [15 Feb 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "California" from VillageOrchid
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Sweetness and laughs from me. Almost as if Sam Carter were writing a Buffy Fan fic for Jack O'Neill. heeheeheehee. good stuff.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [18 Jan 04] • Not Rated
Review of story "California" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I hope it's not the end! this could turn into an amazing story! ah well, i know you have a lot of other writing to do, so don't worry about finishing this. at first i thought Joey was Spike's kid, but then i'm like "wait a minute....can undead people have kids?" lol so i'm babbling now the story was fantastic. ok bye.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [26 Nov 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "California" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Thanks for the story. I like the Remus / Buffy meeting. Never yet read any stories with that pairing.
Such a promising beginning. Please, don't end it there.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [11 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "California" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I love this story! It said that it was completed on the stories page (I think) but I would love to read more of it. Yea for echo!
Kat
ps. I love Life of Brian (Go Monty Python) and A Drop in the Ocean/Snake Charming as well, can't wait to see more updates!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [3 Oct 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "California" from Anonymous Reviewer
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You have to continue this, you can't leave it there!!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [30 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "California" from Anonymous Reviewer
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No, no, no...not the end. You have to write more. I am willing to beg and bribe your muse if necessary. I LOVED this beginning. I would love to read a Remus/Buffy story. I have never read one and I think they would make such a good pairing. They've both been through a tremendous amount and haven't given up. He's so gentle and she's so alive...I love the instant connection. Loved Buffy quoting "How" to him. Joey is a marvelous OC. I like how she speaks her mind. Loved the waltz with Buffy, loved her charming Harry...just totally loved this story. PLEASE write more. :) Pretty please.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [8 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "California" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Touching, funny, and delightful. What a great fic! I'm disappointed that it's only a one-shot. You said that you're considering writing more...may I just say 'pretty please'?
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [8 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "California" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Lovely, lovely, lovely ficlet. I liked Joey, liked that Riley was gone (because, hey, never liked the guy) and LOVED the Lupin/Buffy ... of course, I like Remus with pretty much anybody, but that was rather nice!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "California" from Anonymous Reviewer
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::giggle:: You always have the best one-liners at the end of your fics...And, even though the Buffy/Remus thing took me by surprise, it definitely wasn't unwelcome...It was almost cute...But, then again, you always make the original couples work...:)
I LOVE IT!!!
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "California" from Anonymous Reviewer
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I remember my mom teaching me to twist to the Grease soundtrack and thanks for reminding me. If you want this to be a one shot that is fine, but how bout you take a page from Lucas and give us a prequel. Thanks
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [7 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "California" from Anonymous Reviewer
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Damn straight he doesn't. This was excelent. How does Joey know about Spike? Did you make him come back? And why does she look like him? Did she dye her hair? And did Cordy get back together with Xander (Sexy eye-patch, hee hee)? I MUST KNOW!!!! Please update, as soon as you see fit. I'd like to see where this ends up. Seeya

-Face
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [6 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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