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Review of chapter "Today's color is orange." from SpacedCadet
Review:
***PLEASE*** update !!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [26 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Training Day" from Berserkerzeroone
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Hopefully you'll get back to writing this soon and tell us if the mysterious team medic is either Willow, my lead candidate, or Tara or Amy, cause I can't think of anyone else who it could be, unless you're bringing in another character from another show\book\movie.

Can't wait to see the next five chapters and how it ends.
Review By [Berserkerzeroone] • Date [19 Dec 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Training Day" from AllenPitt
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So Dawn exists? It'd be great if she showed up at some point; D. probably has a high opinion of Joyce, and would be very upset to find Buffy doesn't.
The wiccan medic. Probably not Willow, as vamp Willow is dust. Maybe Amy?
Comments from author:
It'll be revealed in the next part :-). Or the part after that. Hopefully in a way that won't require too much 'suspension of disbelief'. Or leprechauns.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Training Day" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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A wonderful tale. I do hope Buffy's heart will soften a little. I also hope that Scrappy Doo only appears to be slain.

Thanks for sharing!
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Training Day" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
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I don't know why I haven't seen this before - I'm enjoying it a lot and would like to see more.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

The next part is currently under construction so it's a "when", not an "if" ( but I've got a few stories like that so "when" might be a while.)
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [18 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Training Day" from Gideon
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Good to see the various characters coming together. It is interesting to see the slightly different slant that you have put on them in this AU. I do wonder who the mysterious wiccan doctor is though. It can't be Willow because she and Xander were vamped in the wishverse so who else could it be that would recognise Buffy?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Training Day" from PiedraLumbre
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Have I mentioned lately that I love your work. This is another intriguing story that I look forward to seeing continued, and the Au of Au along with other AUs works really well. I'm assuming that Velma ended up in Atlantis, but I'll wait for confirmation before I go with that. I'm also looking forward to your reveal of who the medic is, and guessing Dawn. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the comment. Where Velma ended up after the explosion in her lab... Not really meant to be a mystery but some people don't like spoilers, even for fan fiction. :-)

The medic question will be answered soon. Not sure if it'll surprise anyone. But Dawn is definitely one of the possibilities. :-)
Review By [PiedraLumbre] • Date [16 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Training Day" from Morgomir
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Very interesting story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [25 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Training Day" from draconis
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I could see this easily becoming a favorite if it's continued (as long as you never, ever bring Scrappy-doo into the picture). I really encourage you to continue regular updates to this story.

The idea of taking an AU episode from canon Buffy and making an AU out of the AU (and doing the same with other series (e.g. Stargate) is inspired. Mixing them together and converging in the Stargate arena is appealing and I think presents some fun possibilities.

I like the explanations you come up with on how an AU twists to become even more AU (e.g. the Master not breaking the neck of the much edgier 'scarred Buffy') and then weave each one into your converged story.

Oh!...and a Goa'uld infested Scooby-Doo??? Don't go there either. I have to go wash my brain out after that severely twisted bit of imagination struck out of nowhere.
Comments from author:
(Thanks for the comments :-))

Scrappy-Doo? Hadn't even thought about including him in the story. Hmm... unless both Scooby and Scrappy-Doo are actually demons who look like dogs, I can't see any way to bring him into the story without turning it into a crack-fic. Unless they are already Go'auld hosts :-).

Hmm...
Review By [draconis] • Date [20 Jul 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Training Day" from deathgeonous
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Very interesting AU here. I really want to see just where you'll go with this. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [18 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Training Day" from CPTSkip
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Great story. Is "Doc" really Amy or is she Tara? I have tons of other questions, like who will team up with whom, but I will patiently wait for more updates. Another update yet? Lol! Excellent blending of the Wishverse and the Star Gate universe.
Comments from author:
There are actually clues to her identity in earlier chapters. :-) If you know what to look for :-).
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Training Day" from TwoBlackDragons
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Thank you for continuing this. This is probably one of the first fanfics I read on TtH and until now I haven't been tracking it because originally I didn't understand the tracking system.

Typos in brackets.
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Buffy sighed. "Okay, as long as the Captain explains where he learned how to detect that a building's been warded. I don't [thing] that's something they teach officers in the Marines."


think
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"When someone finally listened to Rupert and let me know, I headed there as quickly as possible. Unfortunately, the vampire was [a] quite a bit more powerful that I was told.


a shouldn't be there.
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Comments from author:
Thanks for the comments. And for pointing out the errors in the text.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Training Day" from Sandi
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Very nice. So the corpsman is Dawn? Explains recognizing the name. It can't be Willow she's dead.
Review By [Sandi] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Training Day" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Hmm, a wiccan medic... Could it be Tara? Or maybe Amy? Cool thing about the Wish'verse is that your characters get to be a OOC as you want.
Comments from author:
There could be a Tara appearance/mention in the future :-) but I'm trying to avoid adding too many characters that would require awkward explanations for their appearance in the story since Buffy was only in Sunnydale for a brief moment in the Wishverse.

So, no Xander or Willow since they died in the Wishverse. And without Willow Tara wouldn't have any clue who Buffy was and the medic recognized Buffy so...

Not sure if that made sense.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Training Day" from SlowMercury
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This is a very interesting AU, and I hope to see more of it soon. I'm also getting more and more curious about this mysterious medic. Good work!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [17 Jul 10] • Not Rated
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