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Review of chapter "To the Rescue!" from Tempe
Looks cute so far. I did find that they seemed a little too familiar with each other for only knowing each other for a couple of weeks. Although I suppose Lois and Clark acted much the same on the show. Who was the vamp? Did Willow really know him or was that an excuse to just go and dust an enemy? How is Willow taking time off from college right now? I had thought it was during the semester but I suppose I could be wrong. Maybe you could have her transfer to MetU? I'm really liking the whole Kryptonian red-eye thing going on. It makes me wonder if there is something more then just a lustful reaction and if you're going to do some sort of weird alien reaction. So great work so far, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go with this. Please update again soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks. The vamp was no one, just someone to dust. Willow is taking a break for the time being...the rest, you'll have to wait and see. Thanks again.
Review By [Tempe] • Date [15 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ArjaiH
I give you one free "something else" to inspire you, and one free "round-toit" so that you can...get around to it. I shall be patirntly waiting for the update cuz' it is a good start to a potentially darn good story!
Comments from author: was fun to write. As soon as the ideas are ready to put to paper, I'll get right on it.
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [6 Dec 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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