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Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from eset
Review:
So the chapter says "the end", but that's not real,y the the end, is it?

-puppy eyes-

They still need to plan the wedding and get Dean out of his deal and most importantly exact beautiful revenge on little Samantha.

Come to think of it, did Dean ever repay him for the faked vision leaving the bus station?
Comments from author:
I'm thrilled you liked the story. I'm afraid it is the end of the story, but hopefully it was a fun ride.

Thanks a bunch for reading and commenting!
Review By [eset] • Date [29 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from spacey
Review:
Interesting way of bringing them together. I think cordy if my fave femme btvs pair for dean
Comments from author:
They do seem to work out well *Nods*
Review By [spacey] • Date [26 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from dulcedecorumest
Review:
I can't believe it's over!!! Closure's always nice and urrthang but this was such an enjoyable fic with a different take (Dean killing Groo) that I guess a foolish and whimsical part of me thought it would go on forever!

I loved the whole Sam faking the vision, Dean racing them back there, Cordelia being Cordelia. The hot conversation sex scene... something about the way Dean effected 'coitus interruptus' was so freaking hot and the last bit with Sam in the diner.

I'm gonna have to re-read the whole thing from beginning to end. *poor me, not!*

xx Dulce
Review By [dulcedecorumest] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Kovac
Review:
I really enjoyed reading this. Good job.
Comments from author:
Thank you bb! *Hugs*
Review By [Kovac] • Date [1 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from dulcedecorumest
Review:
My love for this fic knows no bounds. I just recced it on the LJ Buffyversetop5 page so... yay! For the recc, boo for the WIP-ness of it all. *hint hint*
Comments from author:
*Hugs* Thank you very much. Because of you, I posted up the last chapter. It had been written but I thought the ending needed tightening up/something. Anyway, here it is with less changes than were planned, but hopefully it is a satisfying ending.
Review By [dulcedecorumest] • Date [31 Oct 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from dulcedecorumest
Review:
I have to say, I wasn't sure if I was feeling the whole Dean factoring into Groo's murder and I was wondering how you were gonna make that okay for them to progress but damn if you don't write some mighty compelling fic!

I reallly, really, like this fic. In fact I love it. I'm re-reading it for the 4th time now and wondering pretty darn anxiously when you're going to update?

The Cordy/Dean banter? Inner Dean? Inner Cordy? Premise? = A.W.E.S.O.M.E

I've even recced this fic on my LJ by the way (just so you know my compliments are not just lip service).

PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE, with a cherry on top... update!!!

xx Dulce
Comments from author:
I do have to get this finished up. We actually have it done, but it needs a bit of re-working. I will get it up, promise. I really hate leaving fic unfinished and now I feel very guilty abou thtis one.

Thank you for reading/commenting - I really appreciate it :) And double thanks for the rec, I saw it at LJ (I'm there too).

*Hugs*
Review By [dulcedecorumest] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Clandestine
Review:
Awesome update!
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it bb!
Review By [Clandestine] • Date [28 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Xayian
Review:
I'm on the edge of my seat here! And totally looking forward to what I suspect will be another angst filled confrontation between Dean and Cordy which will hopefully end with smoochies. :D Yes, I'm a bit shameless. ;P
Comments from author:
Smoochies, oh you know Dean doesn't... oh wait, he does! LOL

Thank you!
Review By [Xayian] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from banner
Review:
That was great characterization. I can *see* each of them, sitting around the table, yelling in the parking lot, exchanging confidences quietly. Good work, but when are you going to tell us why Cordelia's blood was toxic to the demon? I really want to know...
Comments from author:
Oh so very happy you liked it and found the characterization on point.

Her demon blood just did not go with its demon blood, was harmful to it. It might come out some more but it was just simply that... human blood wouldn't affect it, but biting a demon/demon blood filled person did.
Review By [banner] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from MaraLiz
Review:
I really enjoying this story; Cordy & Dean seem just the right couple with all they've been through. I'm hoping Cordy will be able to get Dean out of his deal. Take care & looking forward to the next update.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it. The sure give each other hell, huh? LOL

Cordy hopes she can too, but you know between her and Sam....
Review By [MaraLiz] • Date [26 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 2" from Xayian
Review:
OK, the 'no longer missing' scene you added... Very good! Completely pulls everything together and makes for a smooth transition from where they started to where they are now. (I like that btw :D ) Now all I'm going to be doing is wondering all about the hidden demon aspect of their relationship. Will Dean automatically assume that Cordy has demon blood like Sam b/c of her visions? Will he ask her something like "Hey...these visions of your's wouldn't have happen to have started 3 yrs ago, did they?" Will Cordy try to convince Dean that not all demons are bad and some even serve a purpose? Ya know? The usual questions. *grins*

Completely looking forward to your next chapter

EDIT: Ok, so maybe he won't be asking the "Hey...these visions of your's wouldn't have happen to have started 3 yrs ago, did they?" question. *heh* forgot you wrote in when they startedv :P lol
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it. When I first saw your comment on continuity I thought "wth did I do?" Then I was scrambling to find my original version to locate the missing bits! Had a heart attack, but whew... found it.

Glad you are enjoying it. Hopefully I'll have time to post up more this weekend.

*Hugs*
Review By [Xayian] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from banner
Review:
You know, I think it's the medication she's taking for the headaches. I remember the doctors had been giving her successively stronger meds through the series, and after a coma, she's probably on all kinds of stuff to regulate her brain chemistry. She's probably taking a lot of other prescription drugs as well for things like atrophied muscles, drawn tendons, and other symptoms associated with being unconscious for extended periods. Some of the prescriptions are probably extremely difficult for a Hunter to acquire under the table. That would explain why the Powers sent *her,* as opposed to any other handy seer, or hero. And also why her visions weren't telling her what would work.

There probably isn't a tactful way for the PtBs to send a vision saying, "Let the beast chew on you for a while: that'll poison it."
Comments from author:
Oooh the meds, lol... could work. Hee your last sentence, you think like Cordy ::grins::
Review By [banner] • Date [15 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from MaraLiz
Review:
Thanks for adding the scene to ch. 2; ch. 3 now makes a lot more sense. Looking forward to your next chapter. Take care.
Comments from author:
Yeah I'm so glad it was pointed out... big diff! Thank you :)
Review By [MaraLiz] • Date [14 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Xayian
Review:
Okay, very, very, *very* good chapter. However the continuity doesn't go with chapter 2. In chapter 2 neither Dean or Cordy slept on a couch and when they kissed it was while both were half-asleep. Also, you ended it with Cordy annoyed w/ Dean as she went to the bathroom to change and Dean locked her in the house, his intent to use a sling shot and not a harpoon. I'm fairly sure this wasn't what you intended, unless you're going somewhere with this.

Otherwise, like I said, the chapter is very well written.

EDIT: No prob. I look forward to reading the real 3 then rereading this one ^_^
Comments from author:
Thank you for pointing this out. My real ch.3 appears to be missing. I'll have to sort it out tonight! I've inserted a note so that readers are made aware not to read chapter three yet.

Thank you again.

Cas
Review By [Xayian] • Date [13 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ch. 2" from elizarose
Review:
This is the first Dean Cordelia story I've read and I'm loving it. Please update again soon.
Comments from author:
Glad to hear it, fell behind during the hols but will be back on track soon!
Review By [elizarose] • Date [15 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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