I like it. I like the way you have made Dawn the balance between Sam and Dean... she loves hunting but also wants a normal life. I cant wait to see the three on a hunt together.
Hope for another update soon, although i notice that you don't update regulary, but i can live with that as long as the story just doesnt stop mid flow.
Review By [dawnieelf] • Date [1 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Intriguing story so far! The plot of having Dawn as a Winchester is really interesting. I'm also loving her interactions with both brothers and how her relationship with each one is so different. Great work!
I look forward to reading more!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Burning the midnight oil" from Alexis
Review:
Dawn makes an interesting addition to the Winchester family. You've got the dynamics right. I'm interested to see where you go with this.