I love this can you write more to it?

OMG!! This was so freaking hilarious! And one of the best parts is that I can totally see it happening with Dawn, or hell any of the Scooby gang =)

I loved Dawn in this. She was a total kick ass badass and so nonchalant about everything. I would love to see what the CM crew think of her and her rescuing herself. I have a feeling that they would be *very* confused by Dawn and her demeanor.

Anyway, this story was just excellent! I very much enjoyed the plot and your Dawn. Thanks for writing!!

Absolutely hilarious. The scary part is, I can totally see that happening.

I think the only word to use here is YES.

Brilliant story, I really enjoyed it.

That was actually pretty funny. I liked it. Good job, yo!

Dawn very smart and very cool. Being kidnap on regular basis kind to get old really fast. I love how you portray Dawn here.

OK I have to say I like this ending better then the one on the TV show lol. Love to hear Buffy and Faith response when they get called to pick Dawn up from the FBI.

Lisa

It would have been a 10 if you had continued it :)

I really enjoyed. The BAU would have quite a difficult task in profiling Dawn, I think...how would they account for the green ball of energy part?

Hahaha- loved the humor and how Dawn is totally unafraid.

LOL! I loved it! Thank you, I needed that. MD.

Awesome. Maybe eventually you can do a sequel of some sort? Another time where the team goes after a kidnapper and Dawn's there and has already taken them out?
- D

Every time I watch Criminal Minds I think of what would happen if one of the unsubs got a Slayer (or someone similar). I'm glad you wrote it! This story was very funny.

Thanks! I was reading a lot of fics with Fanon!Dawn and thought it would be hilarious if those boys had grabbed her, so it got written. That happens a lot :P I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I can see the confusion on the Criminal Minds guys faces. But, really when you have been kidnapped as often as Dawn, these guys were light weights. And remember: Silence is golden and Duct tape is silver.

Dorothy

That was fun. Go Dawnie! Those guys were so out of their league kidnapping Dawn. More please? Does Reid strike you as perfect for Dawn? Then he could be subjected to variations of the shovel speech from Buffy & Co.

Anyway, really enjoyed that...

(^_^)/
BEM

Yes, poor normal kidnappers getting more than they bargained for with Dawn :D It was far to much fun of an idea not to write.

Very funny and believalbe in the two universes. Please consider continuing the closing scene or expanding the story. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks, I probably won't continue it, I like abrupt endings far to much. But i'm glad you liked it.