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Review of chapter "29" from Harry
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So, one of the kids has the Kekkei Genkai of the FIRST Hokage?!?! This is something else! That makes him related in some way to Tsunade. And I should have known that Wilkins and Snake Face would get together to talk business. Things are going to be VERY interesting in the third story!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "28" from Harry
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I know Gunn and his Lost Boys partially from Angel, but mainly from The Wandererverse. If Spike and Dru say that Gunn and his sister have potential, then it wouldn't hurt to have them checked out! Now, lets see if the report is right or not.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "27" from Harry
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Memo to self: DO NOT get Ino/Harmony upset! I do NOT want to end up beaten and bloody like that! No way, no how!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from Harry
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I KNEW IT! James has lost it, if he is bringing in THAT statue! That thing could destroy the earth if unleashed. But James doesn't care. All he wants is REVENGE!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "25" from Harry
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Snyder is starting to learn. When it comes to the group that are around Summers, DO NOT MESS WITH THEM! You do, you WILL wish that you hadn't!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "24" from Harry
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Well, any and all plans that the PTB might have had for Buffy and company are up in smoke and out the window. And there is NOTHING that they can do about it! The ghosts have found some peace and no longer need to cause problems at the school.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "23" from Harry
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Well, the Nightmare Demon has been dealt with. But now, we are getting into the time that Buffy got telepathic, and the attempted shooting from the tower near the school.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "22" from Harry
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So, Jenny has been kicked out of the Gypsy clan. She has moved BEYOND them and their desire for nothing but Vengeance. Her Ninja training is making her MUCH better than what she could have been, except in the Wandererverse as a Amazon.
Comments from author:
Ah, the Wandererverse, wish they would put some new stories up. Its a great series.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "21" from Harry
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OH BOY! I smell trouble, BIG trouble coming for Jenny and the others in Sunnydale! This Uncle of Jenny and the Elder are typical Gypsies. Vengeance, Vengeance, Vengeance. That is ALL they care about! Well, they are going to be in for a shock!!!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "20" from Harry
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Ino/Harmony made it plain and clear to Amy that she was NOT happy over when she broke the spell! I realize that Amy got a broken nose out of it, but I think that a lot of people are going to have to apologize for their actions, and for what happened.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "19" from Harry
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Watch it Amy. You are starting to get into some VERY dangerous territory, with turning people into rodents. Next thing you know, YOU will be turing yourself into a rat!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "18" from Harry
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Oh dear. The spell worked, but NOT in the way that Harmony and Willow wanted it to. The women want Xander, and the men want the girls! Time to lie low, explain about the love spell, and hope that Amy can come up with a counter for it. Then, I suspect that she will be staying away from the magic for a LONG TIME!
Comments from author:
Wrong, they ALL want Willow and Harmony. And thanks for reviewing and reading our story. I really do hope we get back to writing it one of these days.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "17" from Harry
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Amy, BE VERY CAREFUL! That spell could end up causing all sorts of problems, such as causing EVERY unmarried woman in Sunnydale to go after Xander! And that would NOT be good!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "16" from Harry
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I think I know what the problem is with Xander/Sasuke. He is trying to get the full version of the Sharingan, but he has NOT done what is needed to do that: KILL somebody that you love! Until he does that, he won't get the full effect. And there is no one, outside of Angel/Kakashi that qualifies.
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "15" from Harry
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Its time to take out the Judge! And then, then we have to worry about what James might try next: The Acthula! And that will be even more dangerous than The Judge!
Review By [Harry] • Date [5 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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