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Review of chapter "3" from Delkatar
Review:
Fun chapter!And great story so far!
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "29" from Cristina
Review:
So did you like the surprise? Did anyone see it coming?
Yes to the first and no to the second.

Loved the ending trough.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and enjoying it. Hopefully we will have the next story started soon.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [3 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "29" from Oxnate
Review:
Very good story. It's a lot of characters to keep track of though. Who's who and all that.

I hope you get all your readers back. I know I broke up one of my stories and lost most of my readers too.

One note: The head of the WC is Travers, not Travis.

I'm still trying to figure out what's up with Orochimaru. (don't tell me. I like to be surprised.)

Also if you are starting Season 3 soon, I just want to make one point. In "Revelations", Gwen Post claims Lagos is after the Glove of Mynhegon. Watch the episode again and note that Lagos never attacks the Slayers. He only defends himself against their attacks. The slayers definitely got the wrong demon that day. I would love it if Lagos becomes an ally when you get to that episode. Though, I don't think he said a word during the episode. Maybe he doesn't speak English?

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Interesting ideal. Will definitly have to pass that on. And please, if you have any other ideals, please sent them. And thanks for pointing that out about his name. Lastly, if things look like they are going south, please help us out there too. We don't want the story to turn bad and loss you all.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "29" from JediKnight
Review:
Very nice job on ending this story, I hope to read the next one soon.

-How many sequel might you do? What are you familiar with the series' "Bleach" and/or "One Piece"?

-I never got a e-mail back.
Comments from author:
Sorry, my falt with the e-mail. If all goes well, six stories. I read the lastest Bleach manga on line every week, and see the lastest sub and dub anime of it every week also. One Piece is limited though. Were you surprised about Kit?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [3 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "29" from Hanzo
Review:
a song for the end

FOOLY COOLY !

♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦

"Ride on Shooting Star",.

♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦ ♦

Slide of an orange reflects in the sky

Hanging the pride of a sponge

Spider

No need to hide

the premonition of life captured

it is like a colored dream

Ride on shooting star

I continued singing

like a shotgun with all my heart

A grunged hamster becomes more mature

and is accompanied by a lobster of revenge

Sniper

What do you say that

you can see in that framed world?

I want to touch it before you aim

Ride on shooting star

I'm looking for you and I'm having withdrawal symptoms

I lied to you

Ride on shooting star

I continued singing

like a shotgun with all my heart
Comments from author:
Wow, this is a first. Someone "sung" to me. You loved it that much? Wow. Just... wow. We will try not to disappoint as we continue this story. And thank you for reading.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [2 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "28" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the new chapter, I'm hoping that you will be posting more soon.

-How are you?
Comments from author:
We will and good.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "28" from RHatch
Review:
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comments from author:
Glad you loved it.
Review By [RHatch] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "28" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [11 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "27" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on your new chapter, I hope you'll be adding more soon.

-I'm sorry, but I never got any replies you sent after the one to my review last time.
Comments from author:
We thank you, soon, and my fault there.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "27" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Comments from author:
Thanks! We appreciate you reading, your reviews, and input!
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from JediKnight
Review:
Great job on the new chapter, I hope to read more soon.

-If you send replies to me I never recieved them, sorry. The problem happened after the last message I replied to.
Comments from author:
Thank you. And I'm almost positive I sent it back, so I don't know what happen.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from Hanzo
Review:
♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.♥
Comments from author:
Thank You!! I pray we won't disappoint.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [10 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "26" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
To Shadowhime--

Giles HAS more control than that, he's deliberately being uber-Jiraiya to have James facedesking.

To the author--

Good god, you have talent! These people are certainly showing their characteristics in a steady fashion, and it's a hell of a good show. Thanks again.
Comments from author:
That too, for the first part. As for the second, its a 50 50 split between me and my co-author, so half of the praise goes to him. So from him and me, thank you. And I'm hopping the charactor blend to be somewhere between 70/30 and 60/40, Buffy charactor to Naruto charactor.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [10 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "26" from Shadohime
Review:
*facedesks repeatedly* ONLY Jiraiya would think about that in his situation. Honestly, I thought Giles had more self-control than that.

A good read, as always, and I can't wait for the next one! Hopefully you'll keep everything together this time around!
Comments from author:
Who would you rather have more in control in a time like that, you or someone of Juraiya's caliber? And compared to Jiraiya, Giles has much more control then Jiraiya will ever have.
Review By [Shadohime] • Date [10 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "25" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the new chapter, I'm looking forward to the next part.
Comments from author:
Thanks! And we are already working on the next chapter.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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