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Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from deathgeonous
Interesting and fun. Still not as good as the first few, but better then the last. Still, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
*smiles* Admittedly I had more fun writing Part Six than I did Part Five, but that might be because I had to be more careful of details during the writing of Part Five than I did here.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [22 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Jorrie
OH GOD! >.< Please give the other Buffys and Spikes nicknames! It's hard trying to follow along when I have no idea sometimes who you're referring to. "Non-vampire Buffy", helps, but "other Spike" or "her other self" is kind of difficult when I'm not quite sure which Spike is narrating and such. It'd be nice to just have settled nicknames. Please! Anyways, this chapter was fun! What can I say? Massive orgies are just so much fun! XD Hahaha. I wonder what'll ever happen to Coraline though. She seems to disappear a lot, like so much drama is going on in the foreground that one tends to forget about Coraline. I also wonder when the next dimension hop will happen. This ficcy is so fun, please update soon! I'll be on the look out like usual! Not to mention I'm not above begging, tell me to jump and I'll ask how high! Can't wait! Ta~! ^_~
Comments from author:
Sorry about the confusion, I did my best, but I couldn't seem to come up with good (or could be canon) nicknames for Buffy and Spike. Weird, because Vander came so easily... Still the next (and last) chapter should be slightly less confusing on that. And since in Part Seven they'll be in a new reality without any alternate versions of themselves that should make the confusion completely disappear.

As for Coraline, it was hard to give her a large part in this story, first because she's not a part of the gang she is kinda just there at the moment. That was made worse because Part Six was always meant to be about Buffy, Xander, Spike, and what might have been. So, because Coraline wasn't invested in the universe or the characters at this point it lead to her having a rather small part.

I'm glad you're finding this fic fun, and as for the next update, I'm almost finished with the edits to the next chapter, so hopefully I'll have it up within a few hours (or less since I think all that is really needed now is a spell-check) - I figured I owed it to my readers to get the next chapter done as quick as possible since they'd had to wait so long for an update.
Review By [Jorrie] • Date [14 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from silvergaurd
Great new chapter. Hope to see more.
Comments from author:
Glad you like. Hopefully, I'll have chapter three ready soon.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [12 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from silvergaurd
Great new chapters,,, Love more of the human xander involvment can't wait to see more soon!
Comments from author:
Glad you like the new chapters. Real good news is the rough draft of Part Six is almost complete, so hopefully the next update will happen sooner rather than later.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Darkhime
Yay another story, always like the vamp Xander!!!
Comments from author:

Now to poop on the parade. ;) The downside is that unlike in Parts Two and Three this vampire Xander (or Vander Two) will not have a large part - his big part has come and gone actually, though we'll probably see him at least once more before the story ends. I admit, a part of me wants to do more with him (and the vampire Buffy), but there are other things in this fanfic that needs to be done. Stuff with Willow, Giles, and the souled Spike, and all things considered it's hard to work Vander Two (and Vuffy) into that.
Review By [Darkhime] • Date [9 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slytherinwithwings
The many lifes of Vampire Xander...that would make a great free-for-all fic. Just thought I'd let you know that I love this series. Have you read "Were-animals Xander didn't get bitten by"? Funny stuff.

Comments from author:
*grins* I admit that was one of my favorite lines, and shockingly it wasn't in the very first rough draft. It was only after I got stuck on the last chapter of Part Five that I came back and started looking over the rough draft that I realized Xander simply had to comment about there being yet another vampire version of himself out there.

As for the fic you mentioned - I'll have to look it up, because I haven't read it, but it does sound good.

Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing, and I hope you'll continue to enjoy the story/series, cause there's still lots more to come.
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [8 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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