I do hope that you haven't given up on this story or lost your inspiration as I find this story to be excellent and far too wonderful to languished incomplete. I do hope that in the near future you either find more inspiration or time if that is the problem to work on it. Please keep up the great work and I hope to see more soon....I am willing to beg?
Review By [mishaptaketwo] • Date [19 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Daniel- Either a Bureaucrat' or a Fixer. (I think Fixer works best as he doesn't really have the leader vibe and as a linguist he's able to get what the team needs when they need it.)
Sam is an Engineer through and through.
Teal'c actually seems to be an even mix between an Enforcer and a Soldier.
Jack is a Soldier with a smattering of Adventurer mixed in.
beyond that this story is great and I look forward to reading even more soon.
Review By [powellt] • Date [21 Apr 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
> “I still do not believe it is possible that primitives like yourselves managed to remove Apothis from his host. If we, with the > superior knowledge and intellect of the Tok’ra have not been able to manage such a feat in thousands of years of trying, how > could you?”
Oh, poor Anise. If she only knew she was no longer dealing with 21st century Earth tech, but 295th century Earth tech...nah, she'd still be obnoxious and rude, what am I thinking? Heheheh...
I have played Anarchy Online, and I find myself with a strong suspicion that the technology of Rubi-Ka in 29482 AD probably exceeds that of the height of the Alteran civilization...they just focus on somewhat different areas.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [12 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]