Well, this certainly doesn't 'suck', so whoever told you that it did should be kicked, hard! *nods* lol. Really great story, it was wayyyy to short though, only 3 chapters, but I still enjoyed reading it!
I love Dawn in this, being all super professional working with the Government, but she's still Dawn. Great job. I also love that Dawn is Faith's Watcher, makes sense too, I don't see Faith working or trusting anyone else really. I love the Dawn/Tony flirtage, it has been wonderful so far, they are so cute together. *sighs* I'm also very intrigued by the possibility of Faith/Abby, they would be one interesting pairing...
Ducky and Abby both knowing about the Supernatural, Ducky knowing what PFA really does and Abby having been in Sunnydale for a time is totally awesome! I wonder how Tony and Gibbs would react to finding out about the Supernatural?
Anyhoo, I really loved reading this so far and I definitely hope you decide to write more cause I would love to read more!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [5 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Great!!! I love it! Any whoever says that it sucks, just point them out to me and I'll set them straight. *Evil grin* Anyway, Love the story, please update soon!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [4 Nov 09] • Not Rated
I really like this story. I hope you add another chapter soon. I am really interested where your going to take this. I love how Abby and Ducky know about demons and vampires.
Review By [callmeFaith] • Date [5 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Not bad, but you really don't have to get so complicated with Abby's exposure to the supernatural. There is a much simpler way:
She is from New Orleans. Tales of vampires, ghosts, demons, and other supernatural creatures existing in New Orleans go back long before Anne Rice wrote her books, all the way back to the cities founding in the 1700's.
If such creatures exist, which they do in your story, Abby almost certainly would have encountered them, especially if she spent any time in a cemetery at night in New Orleans.
Review By [ObsidianBlack] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Hmm love it. I have to wonder how long it's going to take Gibbs to find out what is really going on, that man is just to smart for his own good. ^_^ More soon of this wonderful fic please.
Review By [spring] • Date [16 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]