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Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from Rune
Review:
Don't worry about a beta, just write and post, you can tweak and polish it once its done.

Thanks for what is written so far, please write more.
Comments from author:
Sadly, my Muse seems to have left me a while ago - I have not been struck with the urge to write now in a few years.

However this is one of the series I would focus on first should I resume, as I really enjoyed this multiverse.

Dana...
Review By [Rune] • Date [19 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from possom
Review:
Great fic, too bad it's been abandoned. After 5 years any fic would be considered abandoned.
Review By [possom] • Date [31 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
This is a very good story and a very very good series.

I really wish you would continue it.
I love the idea of the Goblin pantheon and would love to read that story!
I would love to see the story of Dawn.
Faith at Hogwarts would be really interesting.
Comments from author:
I keep trying to restart the story. (Actually, I keep trying to restart both this one, and the one stalled in the graveyard, with Cain looking for LaCroix in FK-Toronto, but neither one will cooperate, or rather, my Muse won't cooperate.)

I haven't given up on it yet, but alas, until I am struck by inspiration, I doubt I will succeed in extending the story more than a few paragraphs at a time, and such tiny incremental extensions are not worth posting.

I am glad to know though that there are still readers enjoying reading it.

Perhaps that will help me next time to generate enough inertia to get the story going once again.

I also want to write about Faith's year at Hogwarts, and the actual end of Voldy... That was actually the reason I started this story in fact - was to put Faith, Xander, and Cat in Hogwarts to cause mayhem with canon events. Even though they haven't made it there, they have already shattered events if you haven't noticed...

As for the story of Dawn, it has been started – if you read the first large story in this series, you will see Dawn’s first non-appearance when Mike stops to talk to her, then asks Jeanette to take her to the bathroom, despite her not being there at all as far as everyone else is concerned.

After this story (the one in England) they will return to Sunnydale, for what should be Faith’s Senior year. It is my intention that they find Dawn there at that point (moving the Glory arc up a year or so.) with no one in Sunnydale having any idea she wasn’t there all along. I also intend to tweak Dawn’s age a bit, making her a Senior as well (as opposed to a Junior, or perhaps even a Freshman I think when she first appeared.)

How things will work out from there, it will remain to be seen, but eventually I may get to the actual story of the Goblins. It is way off in the future however, as can be seen by the ages of the pantheon in the goblin’s history. (Remember, Buffy and Faith are visibly older than Xander, Cat, and Dawn in the engraved images. This would indicate several years have passed for the whole group, years which show on the mortal members, but not on the Immortal members, of which Dawn will be one, since she is actually the daughter of Gaia and Janus, thus a half-sister to Cat, and technically the first born-goddess, even if she has no memory of her existence before the Monks make her into Dawn from the glowing orb of potential portal opening power which she is at “present”. Part of the mythos I am using for Dawn is that her creation was actually a part of the creation of all creation – when she was born, so was the multiverse, as her birthing allowed the fracturing of the at that point single reality into multiple branches… As such, she is a rather powerful entity, however, as a side-effect of this, up until she was remade by God at the request of the Monks, she had no specific consciousness, but rather existed as a non-sentient entity. This is why she is technically the oldest, and the youngest of the deities who are not Elder Gods. The Elder Gods are those who pre-dated Creation, such as Gaia, Janus, and Chronos. The Creator is of course older than any of his creations, but in a way doesn’t count as his/her pre-existence to the existence of existence was non-interactive with his/her creation. As far as Creation is concerned, everything came into existence with the births of the Elder Gods, who sprang into being fully formed from the will of the Creator, and then acted as catalysts towards the foundation of first the Universe, then the Multiverse. The lesser gods, angels, and demons were then created as sort of maintenance personnel to help regulate various sub-functions of the assorted realities. Finally came the planets, animals, and eventually peoples and aliens which populate the various realities. In some cases they came about evolutionarily, and in others they were created out of whole cloth or by the actions of the various lesser gods. Creation varies from reality to reality, as defined by the design of that reality. In some the myths are just that, myths, and in others they are the exact truth, with the exception that whether mentioned or not, the overall plan and guidance for the creation came from The Creator, either directly, or through his/her agents.)

As you can see, I have put a lot of planning in to this, so hopefully I will manage to write it at some point.

I will try at least once more to resume this story before the December Apocalypse... (Although that is actually the next time I see I know I’ll have time to try again to write. I have a very broken up vacation in October, which may give me some free and quiet time to write, but the next time I know I will be more or less undisturbed will be the day on the train heading to Weed a few days before the scheduled end of the world. I should have a second day just after Christmas when I will again be on the train heading back south, but since that’s after the 23rd, it may be too late for anyone to read what I wrote, if indeed the world has ended as scheduled by the Big Round Stone Calendar of Doom.)

Anyhow, thanks again for taking the time to leave the comment. It made me happy to know someone was still reading this. :)

Dana...
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [26 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from djhardim
Review:
Very good.

Appropriate having James Bond and Chitty-Chitty-Bang-Bang in the same story. Both were the creation of Ian Fleming.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [22 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from joshlamont
Review:
I know it's been a while since you wrote, and I know how hard a block can be, but- man. If you could continue any of these stories, it would be awesome!
Comments from author:
I will try.

The last thing I tried to get moving again was my Harry Potter/Terminator crossover.

I really tried to get going on that back in November, but alas, real life kept distracting me.

That said, perhaps this weekend I will try and re-read KG 5 and see if I can break past the scene in St. Mungoes and get this one moving again somehow.

Thanks for reading. :)
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [25 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from ChaosCarlos
Review:
In the immortal words of Mr Burns, "Excellent."

I love this story, infact I love the entire FWK series! I hope to read the next part soon, plus I can't wait to see how Xander, Cat, Faith and Harry give old Dumbles and Voldie the finger once again.
Review By [ChaosCarlos] • Date [19 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny some Chicken Sandwiches::

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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from Wyeth
Review:
This is a good beginning, I hope you can update this soon.
Review By [Wyeth] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from firetail
Review:
I love your previous stories but this one kicks ass. Please don't give up on this story
Review By [firetail] • Date [9 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from APS
Review:
Great story,
keep up the good work.

Opinions are like assh0les.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.
Review By [APS] • Date [25 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from NoLifeKing
Review:
I really enjoy this story. Especially Harry's new abilities.
I'm hoping you will continue this some day.
Pretty please? ;-)
Review By [NoLifeKing] • Date [22 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from IcemanII
Review:
Glad to have more of Forever White Knight. It will be interesting to see where this goes.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [27 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from ChiVayne
Review:
Excellent story. I'm not sure I buy Xander's concerns about creating things, except maybe for Harry, since they are a 'normal' part of this universe anyway. One could argue that the stuff they pay for and use is actually upsetting the balance of the economy since they represent an outside interference.
Too bad about Dumbledore, he seems to have been corrupted by the lack of checks and balances with regard to him at least.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [14 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Still reading everything you put out and waiting for updates! Your work is addictive.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [14 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Partial Chapter - Unwalked Path" from Infinix
Review:
Just as excellent as I had hoped. There were a few a few minor typos and and at times the manner of address was a bit off especially during the trial and Wizengamot meeting where a few times they were overly familiar but otherwise highly enjoyable.
Review By [Infinix] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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