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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BlueEyedBrigadier
Review:
Short but oh so sweet! Excellent work!
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [29 Apr 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Sorry I found it funny too. So sorry.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [10 Jun 10] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from clarityfades
Review:
I found it funny!
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [14 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
LOL!
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [14 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from slmncpm
Review:
but it is very cute. i liked it. *smiles* thanks!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [14 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Review:
I thought it was funny. :)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RocksandGlass
Review:
it's pretty funny, if only for the punch-line. I like it.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ekatarinis
Review:
I nearly snorted my tea out of my nose when I got to the end. I loved the sign.
Review By [ekatarinis] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
The schedule is everything, the schedule must be kept, the schedule must flow ;)!.
Cool fic, see ya!.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I thought it was funny. You made me laugh out loud, luckily at home. So good on you!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I was so worried but I'm glad it was funny!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Sarry
Review:
Haha! I think the idea was funny!

You could use some work on, umm.. the style, I guess. But it was still enjoyable for the short work that it was. I'm not really a writer myself, so I don't have any good critism. But keep writing, and you'll get better as you go! :)

Thanks for sharing.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review!

I wrote this one a couple of years ago, and I haven't really gotten the hang of writing drabbles.
Review By [Sarry] • Date [13 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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