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Confessions of a teenage Succubus

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Review of chapter "I know" from starwolf
Review:
other than Anita needed to tell faith everything and explain about her first time better. it was embarrassing too, and I think she would have related better. you story was great also, she still needs to talk to her sisters. a good ending or room for more. thanks for sharing it.
Review By [starwolf] • Date [7 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I know" from nsahdmdto
Review:
Poor Faith! Of course she has to be afflicted with the one power/curse that will be hardest for her to deal with. You handled it really well also, the confusion, fear, even guilt.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!

Ali
Review By [nsahdmdto] • Date [19 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I know" from SaiyaSith
Review:
Very, very good! Great job! I am extrememly happy with how you worked this out, and glad to see that you finally brought Shi into the picture. I would like to see more of the couple! Excellent work!
Comments from author:
Bows Deeply* thanks so much! lol i'm glad you liked it! I'd like to see them too lol i really love Shi not just because hes a character i made up lol.

Ali
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I know" from chaoskitty
Review:
That was beautiful.
truly, you have a wonderful writing style and your character depictions are so believable and so emotionally provocative. i especially loved the interaction between Nathaniel and Faith.
well done indeed!
Comments from author:
OMG i love my readers! You makes me feel so good! lol I'm glad you liked it! You should also take a looksie at Rain of Faith perchance you may also like that one > wink wink

Ali
Review By [chaoskitty] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I know" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Almost to the end, I was thinking "poor Faith, she can't get a break no matter what reality she's in". You did a marvelous job of resolving the storyline without being saccharine or having the characters act out of character!
Comments from author:
Thank you! lol i heart Faith i think she deserved a break lol. thanks for reading!

Ali
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I know" from Dre
Review:
*lets out a whoop* You are the most awesomest person ever cuz 5 chapters posted in a day is just incredible.

I'm glad to see that Faith dealt with the ardeur so realistically, but without all the angst being drawn out too much. Thanks for writing such a great story.
Comments from author:
lol am i so awesome youd go read my newest Rain of Faith and leave a review? lol, its totally finished and if ppl like it i'd like to write a second part.

Im glad you liked this, lol i wasnt sure if ppl were going to buy the way she was acting you know? it seemed like how she would handle it so i took a chance and went for it. lol. YOU are totally cool for reading...

Ciao
Ali
Review By [Dre] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I know" from MistofRainbows
Review:
All in all not too bad. Sort of a rocking story for Faith.
Comments from author:
So glad you like.

Ali
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "I know" from DofEire
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I do love Mommy Anita. And I see so much of the canon Anita in yours; it gives me hope for her when it seems she's becoming too cold. I like your character development for the girls, and how you've kept so much of their original characteristics from BtVS canon, but with that subtle steering along their own paths in the Anitaverse. All in all, superbly done, with that quality that the book reviewers call "finely nuanced storytelling". Brava. ^_^
Comments from author:
*blushes* omg you are totally making my ego have a boost, lol. i tried hard on this fic, glad to know that you like, always here to entertain...

Rain of Faith may perhaps also catch your eye (hint hint) wink wink.

Ali
Review By [DofEire] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I know" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Very nice ending... the scene between Faith and Shi was very touching (no pun intended!) and he makes the perfect person to help Faith.

Keep these interesting and fascinating stories coming!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for sticking round! And i'm glad you like, now...i know a story with your name all over it....Rain of Faith (i think it;s almost as good as this one if not better.)

Ali
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lose myself" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
You really did another great job in your portrayal of Faith and how she did tried to take control of the situation. Very similar to what happen with her running to the Mayor in a way, even though she put herself under the Mayor's control, it was by her choice.

Really enjoying this story.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you so much ;p

Ali
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lose myself" from Chaoskitten
Review:
*sniffles* This chapter made me cry- It is great though- it needed to happen. Faith needed to know that she isn't alone.

Cass
Comments from author:
AAWW WOW! i didnt think my writing could have that effect on people, lol. She did, this fic is really kind of dark and lots of drama but it was...just amazing to write and im glad you're enjoying it.

Ali
Review By [Chaoskitten] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Innocent" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Another good angsty chapter and how you have Faith reacting is very much in character. I like how you wrote Willow and Cordi trying to understand whats going on and you did a great job in capturing their hurt and confusion.


Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath part 2" from Sabryna
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I really like this chapter and the way you described Faith feeling. Her conflict saddened me. The way you let us feel how she is torned between what she needs and what she wants is heartbreaking. I can help it but fear for her, for what she will feel. In her shoes, I would hate everything, everyone so much...
It's one of the fic I'm reading and the best of your serie I think.
Comments from author:
THANK YOU, it was my favorite to write. Faith is one of my fav characters. Don't worry she's a strong person level headed and stubborn. she'll pull through i think.
Review By [Sabryna] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath part 2" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Damn this is heart breaking, feeling so bloody wretched for Faith. You really know how to make a reader get lost in your story.

Good work.

Wispr
Comments from author:
u ole flatterer (blushes) i always try my best to make the reader feel like its really happening glad its working! thanks for reading.

Ali
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [1 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Aftermath part 2" from SaiyaSith
Review:
Thanks for posting again so soon! Heh, I'm eating this up (pun not intended!) ;-)
Great job here, getting inside Faith's head. There are so many ways to have done this wrong and cheaply, but you're avoiding the easy road and doing it right. Keep up the wonderful work!
Comments from author:
omg! thank you so much. I'm really glad you're enjoying it!
Review By [SaiyaSith] • Date [1 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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