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Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from leb
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this is a good story, I would love to read more
Review By [leb] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from JinaSolo
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So, is Buffy the family they find?

She did say that she didn't want to care for Dawn all the time, not never...
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [26 Jul 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from SpacedCadet
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Very interesting start...but where's the rest ?
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [12 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Hanzo
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I look forward to reading what happens next in your story.
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [8 Oct 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from deathgeonous
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Hmm, nice. And it seems that you're doing a 'good' Dumbledore, a rare thing to see now a days I'm sad to say. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [1 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from LeaFairy
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Excellent chapter! I love that Dawn and Harry don't have to be at the Dursleys anymore! Yay, for Dumbledore acting responsibly for once and actually doing the right thing for Harry (and Dawn) instead of what he wants or what he thinks is 'The Greater Good'. Very interesting twist as well. Loved it. I wonder who he will place them with now though?

Anyways, thanks so much for the update on this story, it feels like forever since I've read it! I look forward to reading more!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [10 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Hanzo
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♥ Love it ♥
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [7 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from twlight
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For some strange reason I feel that I have read some of this before, oh well I love this story so far and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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Glad to see Dumbles behaving responsibly (for once). Tracking this story now.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from Wolflady
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I'm glad to see the update. This is one of my favorite 'wish-verse' stories and I would hate to see it abandoned. Keep up the good work. A lot of fanfics assume Dumbledore knew (or suspected) about the abuse, and while I think he was a manipulative SOB, I don't think he was quite THAT bad.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [5 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from banner
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I just reread this story from the beginning, and I remembered why I like it so much. You have managed to make Dawn seem natural in this setting. She and Harry do come off as twins. The deviations from canon flow beautifully, although I did expect Draco to notice the Familiar. I thought he would be impressed by it.

I have one minor criticism: there is no need for lots of direct quotes from canon, reprints of the Hogwarts letters, etc. I've reached the point that I just skim the text of the acceptance letter and skip the Sorting Hat song completely.

I like this more alert and protective Hagrid. He was pretty much a doormat in canon, and it never really made sense to me. After all, he was abused and hounded out of his mother's tribe, and he was framed for murder. He *knows* how much damage people just casually do to children.

This story has a great deal of potential. I hope you come back to it.
Review By [banner] • Date [16 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from Angelfirenze
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I'm really, really enjoying this -- though Hagrid's attitude towards Muggles and Slytherins, in general, is still rubbing me the wrong way.

Not to mention, all the direct quoting from the first book is a bit of a bother but not dampening my excitement.

I'm really curious what would happen if either Dawn or Harry were Sorted into Slytherin and Hufflepuff, respectively.

I'd love to see Dawn do something to Draco in the presence of all the Slytherins that would have him ostracized until he got his head on straight and for Snape not to make up an excuse to pick on either of them or accuse them of being anything like James.

In short, this is fantastic and I hope you update soon.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [20 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
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I don't remember reviewing this story earilier, but in case I did, it bears repeating.

I like this story. It's got a lot of potential to it.

I just hope that Dumbles isn't a manipulative old fart like his is in so many other fics. That's been done to death, in my opinion. Very well done in some cases, but done to death none the less.

I hope that this Kneazle pees all over Dudley's bed, shreds his clothes, makes mincemeat out of his fat calves, and claws up his face.

Maybe it could generate electricity through it's fur and shock the crap out of him; that'd be of the good.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [10 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Hmmm. Loving this, I don't believe I've ever read a fic where they both ended up with like wands before, quite interesting. Getting better every chapter. Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Yeah...I've read a lot where she ends up with one made from Angel's blood, or Slayer's blood, but I didn't want that...too cliche. Glad you like, thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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