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Review of chapter "The Wrap Up" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Now THAT is some story!! Really enjoyed reading it!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wrap Up" from BerserkerNW
Review:
Great story! I like the idea that Xander and Dawn are married. The relationship between Willow, Faith, and Kennedy is a little confusing, but other than that, I really like this story. Especially that line about Fi tossing a bomb in someone's bra for looking at Michael too long. ^_^
Review By [BerserkerNW] • Date [6 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wrap Up" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Not sure why there isn't more recs on this story. The diolog is spot on and so's the action! Love it!
Comments from author:
Wow, thanks. Story continues (BurnNoticeless) in Order of Business.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [25 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wrap Up" from xqqsme
Review:
I am hoping that 10 is the best. I started out reading this thinking I would just skip around a bit and get the gist of the story. Well.....that didn't happen. As it turns out I read the entire story and totally enjoyed it. To make it even more interesting for me......I do not watch Buffy but know from the advertising's a bit about the show and have only watched Burn Notice a couple of times. This missive kept me interested the entire time. I totally enjoyed it and wanted to keep reading to see what was going to happen next. Very good verbiage and keeping it interesting. I would like to read more......keep it going.
Comments from author:
Well thank you, you clearly have excellent taste and a well defined sense of what is right and good in the universe. Thankyou very much...
Review By [xqqsme] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wrap Up" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Wonderful ending and I like your character Blake!

Wispr
Comments from author:
And thanks again, I appreciate your reviews.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Fall" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Now that was a very descriptive and intense battle scen you wrote there.

Love the bit about Willow checking out Faith... those two would make such a cute couple... ;)

I liked how you did the Big Bad's reaction when he saw who Buffy was.

Good work!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you, I think that the dynamic between Willow and the two slayers is far from settled. A little chaos on the homefront...
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Rise..." from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Now that was funny, seeing Willow have to scold other witches for how they were acting. Great visuals on the spell casting.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Larger Storm" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Now that was a wonderful way to show the big differences between the two shows. awesome job with the amount of details while keeping the battle scene going very smoothly.

Sad that I have to end my reading here... just can't handle stories with Willow and Kennedy together.

Take care...

Wispr
Comments from author:
Well thankyou for what you did read, I hope you might reconsider, Good Day.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Larger Calm..." from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Wow... love this chilling version of Buffy and it's something I can see her doing when it comes to Dawn's safety. Good work!

Wispr
Comments from author:
Domo Arigato
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Storm" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Well if I read things right Willow and Ken aren't together anymore... YES!!!!

Love the scene in the club with Faith and Kennedy. The Fight between Sam and Xander was very nicely written.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Well, you might not be very happy in the near future, and gracias.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Calm....." from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
I never had watch Burn Notice but so far you have filled in the blanks for me very well. Faith entering the Vets was bloody great, you really made the visuals of the scene stand out wonderfully.

Wispr
Comments from author:
You are just too kind.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Four Horsemen" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Interesting characters you got here, you did an awesome job describing the Scooby's arrival. Someone gonna die if Dawn looses the baby I believe!

Wispr

ps... OK can do without Kennedy though... :p
Comments from author:
Well unfortunately Kennedy does stick around for awhile...
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oh no!" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
You did a great job with Xander and Willow's personalities. Good work.

Wispr
Comments from author:
And thanks again.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ooops..." from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Now that was an fascinating intro to your story. Like seeing Dawn married to Xander.

Wispr
Comments from author:
Why thank you.
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wrap Up" from DoctorDavros
Review:
Great ending mate.... very satisfying end to an awesome story... Am looking forward to the sequel('s) that are sure to come :-)

Thanks... it's been fun reading this over Chrissy hols :-)

Keep having fun with the writing,
Andrew
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading, there is definitely a sequel in the works as we speak.
Review By [DoctorDavros] • Date [28 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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