Now THAT is some story!! Really enjoyed reading it!

Great story! I like the idea that Xander and Dawn are married. The relationship between Willow, Faith, and Kennedy is a little confusing, but other than that, I really like this story. Especially that line about Fi tossing a bomb in someone's bra for looking at Michael too long. ^_^

Not sure why there isn't more recs on this story. The diolog is spot on and so's the action! Love it!

Wow, thanks. Story continues (BurnNoticeless) in Order of Business.

I am hoping that 10 is the best. I started out reading this thinking I would just skip around a bit and get the gist of the story. Well.....that didn't happen. As it turns out I read the entire story and totally enjoyed it. To make it even more interesting for me......I do not watch Buffy but know from the advertising's a bit about the show and have only watched Burn Notice a couple of times. This missive kept me interested the entire time. I totally enjoyed it and wanted to keep reading to see what was going to happen next. Very good verbiage and keeping it interesting. I would like to read more......keep it going.

Well thank you, you clearly have excellent taste and a well defined sense of what is right and good in the universe. Thankyou very much...

Wonderful ending and I like your character Blake!

Wispr

And thanks again, I appreciate your reviews.

Now that was a very descriptive and intense battle scen you wrote there.

Love the bit about Willow checking out Faith... those two would make such a cute couple... ;)

I liked how you did the Big Bad's reaction when he saw who Buffy was.

Good work!

Wispr

Thank you, I think that the dynamic between Willow and the two slayers is far from settled. A little chaos on the homefront...

Now that was funny, seeing Willow have to scold other witches for how they were acting. Great visuals on the spell casting.

Wispr

Thank you.

Now that was a wonderful way to show the big differences between the two shows. awesome job with the amount of details while keeping the battle scene going very smoothly.

Sad that I have to end my reading here... just can't handle stories with Willow and Kennedy together.

Take care...

Wispr

Well thankyou for what you did read, I hope you might reconsider, Good Day.

Wow... love this chilling version of Buffy and it's something I can see her doing when it comes to Dawn's safety. Good work!

Wispr

Domo Arigato

Well if I read things right Willow and Ken aren't together anymore... YES!!!!

Love the scene in the club with Faith and Kennedy. The Fight between Sam and Xander was very nicely written.

Wispr

Well, you might not be very happy in the near future, and gracias.

I never had watch Burn Notice but so far you have filled in the blanks for me very well. Faith entering the Vets was bloody great, you really made the visuals of the scene stand out wonderfully.

Wispr

You are just too kind.

Interesting characters you got here, you did an awesome job describing the Scooby's arrival. Someone gonna die if Dawn looses the baby I believe!

Wispr

ps... OK can do without Kennedy though... :p

Well unfortunately Kennedy does stick around for awhile...

You did a great job with Xander and Willow's personalities. Good work.

Wispr

And thanks again.

Now that was an fascinating intro to your story. Like seeing Dawn married to Xander.

Wispr

Why thank you.

Great ending mate.... very satisfying end to an awesome story... Am looking forward to the sequel('s) that are sure to come :-)

Thanks... it's been fun reading this over Chrissy hols :-)

Keep having fun with the writing,
Andrew

Thanks for reading, there is definitely a sequel in the works as we speak.