Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from TroyGuffey
Really enjoying this story, hope to see more soon.
Maybe have this Harmony drop back a bit to her old habits, join the baseball team. And since she's got thrown weapons potential, pick up knife throwing.
REPLY: Not continue?!? So much promise, nover to be seen more?!?
Comments from author:
It's complete, with 'Harmony's Halloween' and the YAHF series 'Harmony's Halloween Choices' as sequels. I haven't thought much about continuing it in more stories, so I probably won't. Thanks for the review.
Review By [TroyGuffey
] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Isamaru
WOW! really great! any chance for a sequel? *Puppy eyes*
Review By [Isamaru
] • Date [5 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Katrina
This was actually quite awesome. Thank you. :)
Review By [Katrina
] • Date [20 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from frankocsic
good read. thanks for sharing.
Review By [frankocsic
] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Rune
A redemption story. I like those alot. A Lot. As in very(cubed) much. I really hope you write more in this AU. And don't let Willow steal Harmony from Xander!
Review By [Rune
] • Date [11 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from TDMaster
This is good stuff.
Review By [TDMaster
] • Date [15 Sep 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from lucidity
Great story - Thanks for sharing such an interesting option!
Comments from author:
Yippeeee! You were the one to give my FIVE HUNDREDTH REVIEW with your gracious comment! For that you deserve a reward. So, here's a big, wet, sloppy, Bugs-Bunny-onto-Elmer-Fudd-style kiss!
Review By [lucidity
] • Date [22 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from unicornzvi
Very nice story, I really liked your version of Harmony and you came up with a very believable, self-consistent way to get Xander and Harmony together. A couple of nit picks though:
-I really can't see Cordelia Chase losing control as you had her do when she saw Harmony in the green dress. Not because I think she was a 'nice' person at this point in the timeline but because she's much more subtle and controlled than that and I can't see her getting angry enoughg to lose control over the dress. Not at least until Harmony told her why she chose to wear that dress.
-While the fight with the vampires started quite believable with Xander's tricking the vampire to let him stake it Harmony's actions were slightly less believable then the average fight on the show(which were already quite unbelievable).
-Xander's condition in the hospital and needing someone to care for him once he left the hospital do not fit with the description of the fight.
Review By [unicornzvi
] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from dogbertcarroll
Review By [dogbertcarroll
] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from MavenAlysse
Had to admit - the concept of a "nice" Harmony getting together with Xander was at first a hard one to fathom. You've done a superb job. I enjoyed seeing Xander, the Scoobies, Cordelia, and Sunnydale in general from a "new" point of view. I especially loved the changes Harmony goes through to truly become her own person.
I do hope you end up writing a sequel - having Harmony as part of the Scooby's - seeing Xander in a loving family home - and the changes that these two facts would have to the series is a world I would definitely love to have you explore.
Thanks for sharing!
Review By [MavenAlysse
] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from ChaosRonin
awesone i really love what youv done, as for haloween well id love to see them dress as Alucard and Seras from hellsing it would put a really diffrent twist on things.
Review By [ChaosRonin
] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from DaveTurner
Nice story, I read it through in one go, pity about the ending. I'd have taken it a little further and ended with Harm if not becoming a Scoobie then at least being accepted by them.
Anyway, it made me laugh and cry so well done, I'll keep my eye open for sequels.
Review By [DaveTurner
] • Date [4 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from Schiavona
You have created a great story and I'd love to see it continued. You have re-created a character that is now interesting and has the potential for great growth. In a way, Willow stated what may be the most telling idea in that they saved each other. Together they are better than/more than who they are apart.
As far as a Halloween costume suggestion, how about Lamont Cranston and Margo Lane (The Shadow and Margo is by no means a shrinking violet.) It would be something different than the standard superhero combo or anime pairing.
Thanks again for posting this story.
Review By [Schiavona
] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from djhardim
I wasn't going to read this, but I'm glad I did - nice job.
As for Halloween - from Hellsing - Integra and Walter.
Review By [djhardim
] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from ChiVayne
Thanks for the story, I enjoyed it.
For Harmony, Supergirl or Powergirl come to mind immediately. If I was feeling mean, how about Sailor Moon or Sailor Venus (it might be worth it just to hear some of the attacks called out against vampires). If they go as a couple, Xander is Tuxedo Kamen?
Review By [ChiVayne
] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Not Rated