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Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from twlight
Review:
Oh this is wonderful. I do have to say that your a bit evil for putting this story on hold when you ended this last chapter this way. I love that the problem cheerleader was kicked off the team for her behavior. I do have to wonder if Jordy is going to become a good friend that he comes to the house and if Oz also meets everyone again. I am looking forward to learning why Summer and Winter's parents kicked them out when the two became Slayers and who bound their family's powers or if it was the parents that bound the children's powers. I am looking forward to more of this as soon as the muse for this story and real life allows it.
Review By [twlight] • Date [4 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Please return to this!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [20 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
Awesome! I just caught all the up and awesome!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from slmncpm
Review:
OMG i just found this.. please say you haven't abandoned it?? i need another chapter please!
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [3 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
YAY! Connor!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Can't have demons attacking STANFORD and getting away with it, so it's a good thing there's a house full of young Slayers not too far away.
Comments from author:
Stanford also has Conner, Dawn, and Vi there. Not to mention two people I mentioned only in the vaguest of terms cause this is NOT a multiple crossover despite the fact I point-blank mention a few Harry Potter people. :D
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from harcroft
Review:
"wait a minute. Your brothers name is Spring and he can control plants." certianly an interesting name for someone wiht ( I think) Biokinesis.
Comments from author:
Actually, he's terrakinetic, or, earth-kinetic. I think biokinetic would me more along the lines of controlling biological matter such as human blood/tissue/bones, etc. :D
Review By [harcroft] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirteen" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Soccer mom Spike? *giggle*giggle*snort* Awesome!
Comments from author:
Yeah, I adore Spike but this is definitely gonna be messing with him a little bit.
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [9 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm really enjoying Spike as 'house-father' to a bunch of Slayers and neighbor to the Charmed Ones.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [6 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Wonderful update, I'd like to see more Spike...and maybe some mention of Connor, Dawn and the Slayer with them.
Comments from author:
Spike will be getting a bunch of spotlight here soon. I just need to, uh, set up/finalize the main plots first. Though one of Spike's has already been introduced...
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [6 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from jupitersdaughter
Review:
Jordy, huh? Interesting...
Comments from author:
Yup. *nods* Interesting. :D
Review By [jupitersdaughter] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twelve" from cflat
Review:
Good chapter. I was wondering when you were going to update this again. It sucks that you lost what you had written, but hopefully you remembered the gist of what you wrote.

I did notice one error in this chapter, though.
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“How many polgara’s were there?” Pipe asked.
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You missed the R in Piper.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Fixed!

And yeah, I was not happy when I realized I lost all my fic work. Luckily though I had written out some general plans in my fic notebook so I remember mostly what I had.
Review By [cflat] • Date [5 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Terapsina
Review:
I really like this story, mostly because you use Spike as a lead character. He really isn't used enough. I cant wait to see how Drusilla might interrupt the nice life he is finally living.
But you do have to pair Spike up with someone, Whedon is so mean to him. I admit that I love Spuffy but really I like anything that puts our favorite vampire with someone that loves him back, none of the three women he fell for fully did. Just so you know I vote for Paige, she already has a nickname and I really don't like any of the boyfriends she acquired in cannon.
So when will you update? I fully intend to read this work till the end anyway, but I do have the impatient type of personality.
Review By [Terapsina] • Date [11 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very good
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [25 Apr 09] • Not Rated
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