Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
YAY! Connor!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Can't have demons attacking STANFORD and getting away with it, so it's a good thing there's a house full of young Slayers not too far away.
Comments from author:
Stanford also has Conner, Dawn, and Vi there. Not to mention two people I mentioned only in the vaguest of terms cause this is NOT a multiple crossover despite the fact I point-blank mention a few Harry Potter people. :D
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Fourteen" from harcroft
Review:
"wait a minute. Your brothers name is Spring and he can control plants." certianly an interesting name for someone wiht ( I think) Biokinesis.
Comments from author:
Actually, he's terrakinetic, or, earth-kinetic. I think biokinetic would me more along the lines of controlling biological matter such as human blood/tissue/bones, etc. :D
Review By [harcroft] • Date [21 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Wonderful update, I'd like to see more Spike...and maybe some mention of Connor, Dawn and the Slayer with them.
Comments from author:
Spike will be getting a bunch of spotlight here soon. I just need to, uh, set up/finalize the main plots first. Though one of Spike's has already been introduced...
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [6 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Good chapter. I was wondering when you were going to update this again. It sucks that you lost what you had written, but hopefully you remembered the gist of what you wrote.
I did notice one error in this chapter, though. -- “How many polgara’s were there?” Pipe asked. -- You missed the R in Piper.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Fixed!
And yeah, I was not happy when I realized I lost all my fic work. Luckily though I had written out some general plans in my fic notebook so I remember mostly what I had.
I really like this story, mostly because you use Spike as a lead character. He really isn't used enough. I cant wait to see how Drusilla might interrupt the nice life he is finally living. But you do have to pair Spike up with someone, Whedon is so mean to him. I admit that I love Spuffy but really I like anything that puts our favorite vampire with someone that loves him back, none of the three women he fell for fully did. Just so you know I vote for Paige, she already has a nickname and I really don't like any of the boyfriends she acquired in cannon. So when will you update? I fully intend to read this work till the end anyway, but I do have the impatient type of personality.
Review By [Terapsina] • Date [11 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
