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Review of chapter "The Message." from Harry
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HORENSON! *Forgive my German, but when it comes to swearing, i would rather use it than English.* So, the Council wants to once again control the Slayer Line, eh? Now that this is known, it makes it all the more imperative to stop them. The old council thought of Slayers as nothing but weapons. Looks like they are up to their old ways again!
Comments from author:
Hurensohn, indeed. You have a dirty vocabulary, ja! Yes, the old bastards want to retake control... no matter the cost... It's imperative to stop them because they're worse than the old council and the consequences of their plans could be so much worse than mere control of the slayer line... Something that you'll learn about in detail in the very next chapter.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Breakfast in Jamaica" from Harry
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Xander is DEFINITELY loving being in Jamaica! Its giving him a chance to show off skills that most people did not know he had. But, there are magical forces at work trying to stop Kendra from getting in touch with Giles and the others. Powerful and yet subtle magic. Time to not only make sure that all the phones are protected, but check and see if those who were raised in a traditional matter by the Council were NOT influenced by the Council!!!
Comments from author:
Yes, Xander is quite at home in Jamaica. He's blossoming and letting go of secrets. He never advertised that he knew how to cook and do other things because that would have advertised just how little his family did for him.

Yes, the bad people have spies all over the place... and it's not an accident that they ended up in Jamaica. It's time to protect everyone as much as possible... and time to prepare to fight, yet again.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Skirmishes" from Harry
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If they are going after the original slayers, that means not only the Heartstone Slayers, but Buffy, Kendra and Faith as well! NOT GOING TO HAPPEN! Its time to up the security, and make sure that all Slayers are armed with weapons at all times. No more taking it easy. Be on alert at all times!
Comments from author:
Up security? Well, with few exceptions, they will be sent off world... but that doesn't mean they can be protected from bad magics. Sometimes you can't protect people from danger, you have to destroy that danger.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Fight to the Death" from Harry
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If it IS Rodger Wyndam-Price and a few other members of the Old Council who are behind this, they are as good as dead. The demons will have them for a meal once the contracts are fulfilled. And I shudder to think WHAT they would do if they could undo Willow's spell!
Comments from author:
Yes, Roger and a few of our favorite rats. The demons are the least of their problems... and that's not because the demons won't be problems. One definitely needs to shudder. They're evil. Nothing is so evil as one who commits crimes in the name of 'goodness'.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Black Magic Woman" from Harry
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Something tells me that Xander may have found a lady of his own! The problem will be, getting over his fear of being a father, after what his father did to him. But if this works out, we have a witch to learn from Willow and Tara, as well as a new aid in the fight against the darkness. And I HOPE that Xander does wed her! She is good for him!!
Comments from author:
She is his destiny. He is the one she has seen in her visions. He's healing even though he doesn't yet fully realize it. Xander's witch has as much to teach the others as she has to learn. She is good for him and he will be good for her too.

Thanks for your wonderful support. It is deeply appreciated.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Sunrise. Sunset." from Harry
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*Growls* Demons after the Heartstone Slayers!?!? If I could get a Anime Team or two or three in to help guard them, I would! But, the series is NOT on Twisting!!!! But you CAN find them on FF.net under my pen name of Harry2. *RONINS TO ARMS! GUARDIANS TO ARMS!*
Comments from author:
Now that would be an interesting fight! Glad you feel so strongly about this. It means I've made you care about my heartstone slayers. I'm so glad. I'll have to take a look at your series. Of course, right now, I'm trying to focus on finishing this story, so it may be a while.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Summer Ball" from Harry
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Pegasus Galaxy? I smell a tale with Stargate Atlantis in the future!
Comments from author:
Indeed. The first chapters have been written. It won't be posted until this story is finished, however. I can't manage any more unfinished stories...
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Life After..." from Harry
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Well, this is a great thing for the Slayer that lived disguised as a boy. I hope that she and Draco have a GREAT time at this dance!
Comments from author:
I wanted to explore a little of the lives of the slayers who stayed after the battle. I think Draco will have fun.

Blue
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Restoration" from Harry
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Angel has taken the first steps toward truly becoming human. He has gotten his act cleaned up, making peace with people he has hurt, and has even seen changes in one of them. Cordelia/Illyria have gotten along much better, even using Illyria's teleportation ability to find material that will help out the Asgard. Looks like things are looking up, but I smell trouble on the horizon for others.
Comments from author:
Angel finally figured out that he couldn't be a vampire and be human. He had to choose. He had to grow up. Unfortunately, he was an addict long before he was turned. Addicts don't deal well with real life... Learning that he had limits as well as humanity was hard for him.

Thanks to Illyria's genetic gift, the Asgard will not have to die. In their gratitude, the Asgard find a way to create a new human body for Cordelia and restore her... And even restored, she doesn't want to go back to Angel. She's grown up.

there's always trouble somewhere... it's the way of the world and human nature.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three Weddings and a... Transfer" from Harry
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Well, we had Oz and his lady, Dawn Patrol and Connor and Willow and Tara! Great couples, although I think B was a little upset that she didn't get to plan the wedding like she wanted. As for the Transfer, Faith and Robin really gave there suggestions some thought. I think that Giles is not going to have any problem with those requests.
Comments from author:
It was time for some joy. Dawn wanted to have her wedding her way. Low key, but with all those she loved there... Buffy would have felt obligated to make a big deal... even though she wouldn't want a big wedding herself. No, Giles knows he has good people. His council is in great hands.

Blue
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Hearts of Heroes" from Harry
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*Brushes aside tear* In every war, there are those who don't come back. This time, the slayers WERE named! And those to the Wizarding world were named as well, to honor them in this battle.
Comments from author:
Yes, we must have a tribute to our heroes. And Buffy knows them all. It's heartbreaking that we lose people in war, but absolutely vital to give them their due and to never forget their sacrifice. Everyone lost someone. This was a war for the planet and everyone came together.

So grateful that it touched you.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Being human..." from Harry
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Well, Charles is now like Dru and Spike. He may be a Vampire, but he has his humanity, and that is what was important to him. And I look forward to the new mixed teams for SGC. From the looks of things, its going to be very interesting.
Comments from author:
Yes Charles is going to do great things. And he's gonna be a wonderful husband. Yes, the SGC will have some lovely teams. You'll never guess where things will end up!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Will" from Harry
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If Kennedy had as much money as she seemed to have, then Red and Tara are going to be SET! Sure, Willow will use some of it for a project or two, but she will run the company very well.
Comments from author:
Think Microsoft rich then add say... Texaco to the mix. Willow is set for several lifetimes. She's the richest lesbian on the planet! And she'll change the world of computing too... after all, she's full of ideas *and* they'll use her tech to incorporate some alien technology into earth tech...
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Miracles and Heartbreak happened here..." from Harry
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Lots of lives saved thanks to a certain slayer family sending out a call, and look who showed up: Hawkeye, BJ, possibly Charles and a WHOLE LOT of MASH MD's! When you need surgeons, you call in THE BEST! As for the news from Heaven, you surprised me. Tara causing a MAJOR stir in the heavens over what she did, Red getting recognition, revived Slayers getting the option to stay or go back to heaven, Dru and Patrick being told that they are unique and respected in heaven. You blew my mind! And that does not happen often!!!! Now to see how this shakes out, because just because the Senior Partners have been taken out, does not mean that evil has given up!
Comments from author:
I had to give my MASH folk one last time to serve warriors in a war... they were so good at it. Yes, everyone was there, including Father Mulcahy... Col Potter was a bit too old, though he was still alive. The actor lived well into his nineties, so I went with that.

Yes, it's not often that people are so pure that they reach out and touch the grace of heaven. No ordinary, selfish witch could have done this, but Tara was utterly selfless and when she 'asked' the power flowed through her.

So very happy that this chapter blew your mind!! I aim to please. No, evil never gives up. Human beings will manufacture it, it doesn't require demons... Sadly, as long as we're alive, there will be evil of some sort to fight... but there are also warriors for good!

Blue
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "True Color" from Harry
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You weren't kidding when you said that Tara was going to be on the front seat of the battle. And Red has been doing her part as well. Add in what Connor and Dawn did, this is one FANTASTIC spell! I mean, it sounds like the mages and wizards, along with some of the others, have pulled off the counter to what the Senior Partners wanted to do. And those three, The Wolf, The Ram and The Hart, ARE GONE! T-Bear DESTROYED THEM! And it was not from Dark Magic, no, it was simple white magic, used from all sorts of sources. Looks like the fight has changed in favor of the forces of Light!!
Comments from author:
Darkness cannot destroy darkness. It can only be dark. It takes light to destroy darkness. Tara coming back had to be a big deal. The powers that be don't just send people back so they can be with their loved ones. Tara has fulfilled her destiny and even surpassed it. And she's still humble. I love my Tara!!

I'm really glad you enjoyed my spell. This was one of the harder, more involved chapters to write, but I enjoyed it and I was really happy with the way it turned out, so I'm glad you were happy with it.

Connor and Dawn bound reality together with the energy and the light that Willow and Tara gave... As powerful as Willow and Tara were, it was Connor and Dawn who were able to close off the hole.

And of course, they had plenty of help from the wizards in the air, the planes in the sky and the slayers on the ground.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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