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Review of chapter "Eve" from IllusionsofBliss
Review:
This is a really cool idea! Shame you never finished :(
Review By [IllusionsofBliss] • Date [18 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eve" from (Current Donor)kayariley
Review:
more, please!
Review By [(Current Donor)kayariley] • Date [23 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Eve" from paradiso
Review:
great story. Please update soon!
Review By [paradiso] • Date [12 Sep 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Eve" from betrayal
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Am glad you updated, I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope that Sam and Jess make up, but hopefully she'll kick ass before that happens.
Review By [betrayal] • Date [8 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "101 uses for umbrella sticks" from zafaran
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{snicker} Oh, yeah. Getting Buffy into the mix should be quite interesting if your muse decides to do that. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
Review By [zafaran] • Date [13 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Demon slaying and dating...not alot of difference" from banner
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At first, I thought this whole, "Let's talk business... of course, in a bar ... I'm really going to talk business ... have another drink" thing was a little obvious for Dean. Then I thought about canon!Dean, and how he treated Jo Harvelle, and realized this is SO just what he'd do. He's still trying to prove that she's "just a civilian girl." Get her drunk and confirm that she's a lightweight tech weenie. He'll get laid and with any luck at all get her to crush on him so she'll follow his orders. Of course, those orders will keep her as a friendly lay while he's in Palo Alto, and she'll do all the research he can dump on her while she stays safely fray-adjacent.

Thank God Dawn's a trained Watcher. I can't decide whether she's going to be disgusted at his casual attitude toward sex or amused at his attempts to sideline her...
Review By [banner] • Date [17 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the loop" from Specks
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Ooh, I can't wait for the round table discussions that are bound to arise out of this. I wonder what Jess and Sam fought about though.
Review By [Specks] • Date [20 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In the loop" from Kirallie
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So will she tell Sam now since she knows they're hunters?
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [20 May 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never a tale of more woe" from FAITHFUL
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I cannot wait to read if the girls are going to tell the guys about the demon and when Dean and Dawn are going with their relationship. Please do not keep me waiting for the next chapter.
Review By [FAITHFUL] • Date [8 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never a tale of more woe" from (Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane
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i could only give u a rating 10 cause thats how high the rating metre goes but seriously this diserves like a 100
a lot of ppl write dawns character like shes still innocent when going through the trials shes gone through on the hellmouth of course shes
gonna be a little jaded so snaps for the start of the story ... hope u continue and update soon
Review By [(Recent Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [30 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never a tale of more woe" from Rangerforever
Review:
hi Mate 7 Chapters I think that is Enough of filler Chapters Make Dean and Sam Know about Dawn and Jessica Secret or Dawn and Jessica Know about Dean and Sam Secret We need Chapters that have Important events not fillers
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for reviewing it is much appreciated, I am sorry you feel that the last chapters have been filler however I believe that character development is very important and are events in and of themselves, if you do not try to get into the head of the characters you don't have empathy for what they are going through. I hope that you continue to read and enjoy my fic.
Review By [Rangerforever] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never a tale of more woe" from tals
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Another good chapter, although there are a few spelling mistakes; it seems like you rushed the writing process a little: "aive" instead of "alive", "peices" of literature instead of "pieces" of literature, and a few other mistakes of that nature. It wasn't enough to make me not enjoy the chapter, but it did interupt the reading of it slightly, so I thought I should mention it to you. Anyhow, thanks for sharing.

Tals
Comments from author:
thanks for telling me ;) I always appreciate help with grammar and spelling because this is un beta'd and I am dyslexic so for me it makes sense. I wil try harder to look over my work I am really glad that you enjoyed the chapter.
Review By [tals] • Date [28 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never a tale of more woe" from Kirallie
Review:
Okay I'm confused. So Sam and Dean already did their weekend away? And the demon didn't kill Jess so Sam is back in classes and Dean's hanging around?
Comments from author:
Yep. Sam and Dean came back during chapter one, and Dean decided to hang around
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [27 Mar 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What is your childhood trauma?" from (Past Donor)sevangel
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Awww. I heart Dean/Dawn. My very favorite two characters and my favorite pairing. Can't wait for more, keep up the great fic.
Review By [(Past Donor)sevangel] • Date [17 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is your childhood trauma?" from Kirallie
Review:
Good chapter.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [17 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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