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Review of chapter "Chapters One through Four Edited" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters One through Four Edited" from DarkestSlayer
Review:
hehe somebody has Buffy issues
Review By [DarkestSlayer] • Date [12 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of story "My Cousin Xander" from race
Review:
more please
Review By [race] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "My Cousin Xander" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
You better make it longer!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [27 Dec 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "My Cousin Xander" from Lyd
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I'm enjoying the fic and hope the bunnies return. I like the interaction between Xander and Bella and would enjoy seeing more of that. And I seriously can not wait for the Edward Shovel speech. How or are you planning to modify it for their kind of vampire? And imagine farther in the future during New Moon, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn. Tons of great moments for scooby style quips.
Review By [Lyd] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "My Cousin Xander" from Silver
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I really like this so far... I only just found it and almost didn't leave a review. Why? Because it has not been updated since January. I never give a 10 if the story has not been updated for over 4 months. Also, 9 times out of ten, the story is never going to be updated - that has been my experience anyway. But it was such a different approach to most Twilight/buffy crossovers that I thought I'd give it a try. I like the interaction between the scoobies and Bella. I trust there will be an explaination as to what Bella is running from? or the "situation" she refers to? this was well written, and Please update soonest!
Comments from author:
First off, thank you for reviewing, Silver! Feedback is like sugar-I honestly can't do anything without having something sweet at least once a day.
Secondly, as soon as- and I can't believe I'm saying this- the plot bunnies come back from their vacation and start attacking me again. That's why there's an author's note at the top of the first chapter asking for a few paragraphs of what people think should start the next chapter off.
As for the "situation"-it's set right after the baseball game with the Cullens. Bella just had Alice and Jasper to take her to LA and the Scoobies instead of Phoenix. And I'm glad you liked the interaction between the Scoobies and Bella. Maybe I should do flashbacks to the altered season 3 and explain the bad blood between Faith and Bella?
I hope this helps!
Jedislayer
Review By [Silver] • Date [29 Aug 09] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "My Cousin Xander" from spring
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Okay I love this so far, however the chapters are very short and they don't seem to have much to them. Do you know what I mean? I hope to read more of this potentially wonderful story with longer chapters soon.
Review By [spring] • Date [22 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "My Cousin Xander" from Joseph
Review:
Please Update
Review By [Joseph] • Date [18 Feb 09] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "My Cousin Xander" from Kirallie
Review:
So will Jasper and Alice get explanations of who everyone is soon?
Comments from author:
Yup. Cordy's gonna get very pissed at the PTB's at one point.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "My Cousin Xander" from immortalwizardelffan
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Interesting. So Bella talked Jasper and Alice to heading to LA instead of Phoenix.... *grins* Nice. Can't wait till Xander, Angel, Spike and the rest meet Edward.

Do I sense Edward getting the dreaded.... "Hurt her and I'll bludegon you to death with a shovel" speech?

What will Edward, Carlisle, Esme, Rosalie and Emmett think when they meet the Scoobies? I think Emmett and Spike are going to get along like gangbusters, and start some prank wars... along with Xander.

*snorts* That's probably why Bella likes Emmett, he reminds her of her Cousin and surrogate big brother, Xander.
Comments from author:
Oh heck yes is Edward getting that speech! What's going to be even funnier is Jasper or Emmett getting mad at Spike and then trying to punch him. And it's possible about the prank wars- I honestly haven't thought that far ahead. Thanks for the idea though.
Review By [immortalwizardelffan] • Date [3 Jan 09] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Chapters One through Four Edited" from Kirallie
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Okay so is this when Jasper and ALice took Bella to run form James? If Bella was in Sunnydale then does that means she already knew about vampires?
Comments from author:
Yes she knew about vampires. But with all the differences between the two types, she decided to wait and see if they were dangerous to people before calling Xander for help. I'm just playing with both canons a lot.
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [1 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapters One through Four Edited" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Interesting beginning!
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [27 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapters One through Four Edited" from Valandar
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"Buffy's in Rome. She probably won't show up. If she does,she's going to get killed."

Huh?!? Why?
Comments from author:
I don't really like Buffy. And if I try to write her, she'll be extremely out of character, so I'll probably just have her killed off.
Review By [Valandar] • Date [25 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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