Very cool. I liked it so far! Buffy and Bella as sisters is a cool concept and I liked how you had Buffy save her from being hit by the van. I'm happy you are keeping Bella and Edward together, but you should hook Buffy up with Carlisle. He is older, smart, strong, and very sexy.
Review of chapter "The Return to Forks" from chrysanne
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Just want to let you know, because I was so INSPIRED by this fantastically written fic (nudge, nudge), I went ahead and made a few banners and a wallpic for it over at my art collection, Around the 'Verse. Lovely, fic, again!
Oh my goodness. That is beautiful! Thank you so much for making it... If I ever update, I will definitely put it in the chappie and give you a shout out!
Speaking of, I'm not sure when I'll update this again. I'm not saying that I NEVER will cause it still has a special place in my heart, but honestly, I've just sort of lost interest in it. I kind of got over the whole Twilight thing and, actually, fanfiction in general. I'm seriously busy with graduating and trying to find a job, though, so maybe my muse will come back during the summer? Here's hoping!
Review By [chrysanne] • Date [28 Feb 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Oh, hot damn no. Please tell me you did not just leave it there. NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I truly have enjoyed the sisterliness between Buffy and Bella -- I'll admit that I was hoping for Bella to have more of a backbone with Buffy as a sister, but I trust that there is a reason in the plot for it otherwise. And please, please, please consider returning to this fic. It's inspired me to make some fanart that will be up at my art collection at some point, and I feel like this work could be expanded even further.
And as cliffhangers go, I will grudgingly admit that this one was fantastic. Grudgingly because I want MOAR!!!! :D
Review By [chrysanne] • Date [21 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Accident" from SkyeFerguson
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This story is really good. You've managed to tie in Bella and Buffy perfectly. I can't wait to see the rest of it.
Review By [SkyeFerguson] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Okay I have to disagree with you about the movie, I loved it and it made me want to read the books as I had thought that they would be a silly book meant for teenagers. As for the paring it wouldn't be right if it was a Buffy/Edward pairing. I love this excellent chapter the fact that Bella has someone looking out for her is wonderful (school). I love how you are having Buffy take her responsibilities so much more seriously. ^_^ I really like the part that had Buffy say "oh shiny" I always love it when someone puts that in a story when Buffy had been so serious just moments before. More soon please of this wonderful fic.
Review By [spring] • Date [4 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Okay, I am completely behind the fact that you let Buffy save Bella instead of Edward. It just fits the story waaay better. I'm guessing this is how the Cullens are gonna figure out that or favorite valley girl ain't exactly helpless, lol! I'm eager to see how Buffy's gonna get around Carlisle if he figures out that she heals way to fast for a regular human. Also, I do hope Buffy can manage to kick Edwards fine little tush at least once for causing her sister pain. I'm very anxious to read the next chapter so, come back soon, pretty please!
Review By [pensivegal] • Date [4 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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