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Review of chapter "A Chance to Find Herself" from Valkyrie
Review:
Interesting. It seems a little repetitive at times though, overly so sometimes.

Riley's experiencing cognitive dissonance. Still the thing about dissonance is that it has to pass. One cannot live in constant moral conflict with oneself, and Riley seems to keep coming back to that whole Faith-killed-people thing. If this is a Riley/Faith pairing, it does not appear to be going anywhere any time soon.

On the up side, I like the way you portrayed Buffy, even if she is my favourite character. It fits with what she's like in cannon.

Hope to read more soon.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [25 Aug 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Shooting in the Darkness" from (Past Donor)boo
Review:
I just love this story. First off, you have three of my favorite characters, Faith, Riley and Graham. You write very well and I love how the path to redemption and hopefully Faith and Riley getting together is long and drawn out as it would be realistically. Please continue and keep up the good work. Can't wait to see what happens when they have their talk. Clearly something that occurred when getting rid of Adam helped Riley make a decision. The questions are what was it and what is his decision? Aagh! The suspense! :)
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [12 Jun 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rockets, Plans and Spikes" from penyn
Review:
awww...you got rid of Spike. Still, love the story.
Comments from author:
While Spike is an amazingly versatile character (and he's got great cheekbones), he's not always a nice guy. For this particular storyline, he had to die.

I'm glad that you're enjoying this particular story.
Review By [penyn] • Date [3 May 05] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rockets, Plans and Spikes" from (Past Donor)boo
Review:
I love this fic and think you are doing such a great job on it. I love how well you've written faith and her vulnerability. It fits for me the way I think she would feel. Please write more. I can't wait to see the slow dance you have faith and riley in payoff when they are together and an inevitable face off between them and the scooby gang. I hope Giles will come to his senses.
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [3 May 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bandages and Battle Plans" from (Past Donor)boo
Review:
This was a great chapter. It seemed a little rushed with Riley but a really good description of the horror he must be feeling. I'm so glad you updated so quickly. Please continue, I am really enjoying this story and how Riley and Faith evolve. Thanks
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [20 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Crushing Truths" from (Past Donor)boo
Review:
I love your Riley and Faith and I think you manage to do a great job with Buffy without totally bashing her. Pelase keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

As for Buffy, I think that she and Faith brought out the worst in each other through season 3.
Review By [(Past Donor)boo] • Date [18 Apr 05] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "That Sinking Sensation" from Cutiepie
Review:
Thank you for continuing this one. I really enjoy it, and was afraid that you'd dropped it. I find that I actually like your version of Riley. =] I can't say that about very many versions of him. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
You're most welcome.

No, I'm planning to finish all of my WiP longfics and serials, and when the end of Faith & Second Chances comes around, the last one will have 'End Faith and Second Chances #. End series.' at the very bottom. It just might take a while.

as for Riley... He was a character with a lot of potential, and I felt that the writers just... well, I think they got bored with him and decided to write him out of Buffy's life. So it's nice to occasionally go back and give him another chance.
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [26 Oct 04] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "That Sinking Sensation" from war
Review:
great story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [26 Oct 04] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Broken Faith" from kaiyah
Review:
Good storyline/ spinoff on the actual episode. You did a good job with the characters. I like how Faith and Riley are interacting, how they're learning from each other. Keep writing!
Review By [kaiyah] • Date [10 Jun 04] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Settling the Score" from Cutiepie
Review:
What happened to all the reviews you used to have for this story? I know I left at least a couple, and now there are only a couple total!

Nonetheless, another good chapter. I like where this is going, and look forward to reading more. Thank you for taking the time to write it. =]
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [29 Apr 04] • Not Rated
Review of story "Faith and Second Chances" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
I always thought the show could have handled the aftermath of the body switching better, and your way is definitely more interesting. The pairing of R/F is one I'd never thought of, but the way you've set it up, I could buy it. Faith's remorse and confusion was perfect, and I look forward to what you do with this.

houses
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [12 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Faith and Second Chances" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
This is very interesting, i think they could be good for each other. Now I'm just wondering how Buffy will react.
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [10 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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