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Review of chapter "Bells and Lights" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Beautiful wedding.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [15 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Obsidian
Review:
just one word "awesome"
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [15 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from LovelyLucy
Review:
OMG. This story is ADDICTING. Seriously, I spent days holed up in my room doing nothing but reading this series. Every time I tried to go to sleep, I kept wondering what Dawn and Ronon were gonna do next. I'm dead serious. I was going to read the next story ('cause I was waiting for a Roswell cross too), but then I realized I hadn't even finished the first season of Roswell, so the story probably wouldn't make any sense to me.

Before I get into total ramble mode, I'd like to tell you congrats on the baby! Even if it's been awhile since you posted that, a toddler is always fun to have around.

Okay, that out of the way, I have to say something else:

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE try to make time to work on the next story in the series. I understand if you don't have time, but, like I said, this story is very addicting.

I better go before I start to babble. LOL

LovelyLucy
Review By [LovelyLucy] • Date [17 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from moonstarsfu
Review:
I have just spent the last 5 days reading this entire series and it is fantastic!!! I absolutely love Dawn/Ronon and Les is an awesome character, love her and Jon together. Also a huge fan of Lexi. You did a great job of incorporating Dawn into the SG:A universe. I see that you had plans to continue this series, is that still the plan? Because I for one totally encourage that *grins* After finishing this, I kinda don't know what to do with myself, I think I'll see what other Stargate fic are out there and continue on this theme. Great job!!
Review By [moonstarsfu] • Date [25 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Mordare
Review:
Very awesome story in a great series. I am glad I am reading them late actually so I do not have to wait on the updates. :P

Thanks for all the hard work.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [8 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from JonnWolfe
Review:
I found your series last week, and in that time I've read it through twice. Currently on a third rundown only because there isn't more to it.

I do hope you continue this story, because I want to know how Atlantis fairs; when/if it gets back to Pegasus; if Les/Jon will happen; and if Rodney/Willow happens... mainly because it'll be funny.

Honestly, I love the integration of these two series. Want more.

*hugs*
Review By [JonnWolfe] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from RaeJoy
Review:
A definite favourite. Thank you.
Review By [RaeJoy] • Date [30 Sep 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Vickzie
Review:
Brilliant series and i can't wait for the next installment whenever that may be!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from maxthehobbit
Review:
The end sort of really isn't. I mean Atlantis is apparently stuck in San Francisco Bay. I didn't get the part how it flew away ... not an island, but a space craft?

It was hard reading this series because of the thousands of mistakes like changing gender, adding needless words and leaving out key words, but it was a good read just for the imagination that was put into it. But if you decide to write again, you should reread it before posting to correct the errors, or have someone else review it before posting. Although it seems to me if someone hasn't written anything for more than 2 years ... they will never post anything again.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pleas and Threats" from maxthehobbit
Review:
I'm confused: Dawn dies if Ronon dies, when did this happen, did Dawn know this before they were 'married.'

What exactly happened with Ronon when he was with the traitor?

What caused the traitor to give his life to save Ronon?

What/how did the wraith(s) torture Ronon?

I checked to make sure I didn't miss a chapter, going to check again cause I missed a lot somehow ... must have missed a chapter somewhere ... damn computers.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from HebiR
Review:
I really love the image of the big scary Wraith, even more terrifying than Ronan ever was...followed around by his bunny, Saint Peter. I know that St. Pete's a hare, not a bunny rabbit, but I doubt most will notice that immediately. By the way, is there a reason that both Dawn and Todd have companions with very long ears?

Actually, don't hare's have painfully strong kicks? Even more humorous than the adorable pet is the idea of that adorable pet attacking those who are really nasty about Todd's presence, and being somewhat effective about it.
Review By [HebiR] • Date [27 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from CageFire
Review:
Great series, it took me quite a while to read through it, but pretty good. I'll miss it, and I'll hope you continue it someday, perhaps when stargate universe has gone further along so you don't have to make everything up past a certain point.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from draconis
Review:
Is series going to be continued or is it abandoned? Getting VERY mixed messages here.


I see "The story 'Meeting the Scoobies' was removed from the site by the author."
http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-19191

and,

I see that according to Epilogue (30) in Command Key that the sequel to Command Key is NOW apparently "Key Piece"...which is apparently not yet posted?
Review By [draconis] • Date [9 May 10] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Old and the New" from Katt
Review:
I love this series but what happened to the next part 'Meeting the Scoobies'? Or am I blind and missed a note somewhere?

Katt

PS Heh nevermind I see it now =p
Review By [Katt] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Nessann
Review:
Wow I really enjoyed reading what you wrote in this series, i found it very amusing in parts and sad in others. Ronon and Dawn are good for each other The way you have written the interactions and trouble they both get into fits them very well. Cannot wait to read more. Great job!
Review By [Nessann] • Date [29 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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