Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Words are spoken" from Prometeus
Review:
Wow, Thanatos is a weakling. Some loser Watcher questions him for wanting to know why some bitch tried to kill him and he folds instantly. Give me a break. Giles is lucky Thanatos didn't break every bone in Kendra's body and knock a few of her teeth out to teach her a lesson. The kind of lesson Buffy would benefit from too and might save both their stupid ridiculously gung-ho narrow-minded lives.
Well, this point, where your own original characters are out-of-character, in the same chapter you introduce him no less, is where I leave off. Good day to you and please learn about logical consistency some day. Hint: logical consistency is NOT "mysterious badass becomes defensive when a third rate watcher looks at him cross-eyed then proceeds to spill all his secrets to the people he despises". That's what's called a logical *contradiction*.
Oh yeah, and a logical contradiction is where someone rapes you while you scream NOOOO and then says you obviously wanted it. Yeah, logical contradictions are bad things! BAD. BAAAAD. And not in a good way but in a bad bad way.
Comments from author:
A man's reputation, especially one being handed out by a group that hates him, is NOT what makes the man. Please learn the difference. Thank you.
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [12 Mar 10] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Doom and Warren is scary and they are not even the main villain. And I do believe that you made Buffy a bit more of a bitch than she should be in this season. More later as I finish this fic. Thanks
Comments from author:
Well, I figured anyone would be upset having thier boyfriend or girlfriend get stabbed in the chest with a claw. I am trying to get her and Doom back into charater and I hope that this continues to improve. Thanks for the review!
Review By [LFW] • Date [6 Dec 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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