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Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [15 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Please update!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [8 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from WolfWriter
Review:
Please don't leave it hanging here! This is too good to remain in fanfic Limbo!
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
Nice start to this story. It would be a shame if more was not written. Hope to see more.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [11 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from oldgirllost
Review:
I like this beginning. Is there going to be more????
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [9 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from FireWolfe
Review:
This is a great start. Any chance of an update?
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from Morgomir
Review:
Great idea. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Interesting setup.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [16 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Excellent, I look foreword to more.

One minor nit:"“The only people who could claim this as a national resource are Egypt and England, Senator. The Gate was discovered on Egyptian soil and was discovered on a dig run by my father who was, to his dying day, an English citizen"--shouldn't that be "Britain" and "British subject" rather than "England" and "English citizen"?
Comments from author:
Hmmmm... I'll look into that...

Jasper
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [19 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from CeruleanRose
Review:
Really good start and am looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [CeruleanRose] • Date [16 Feb 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from mrsinister
Review:
Okay interesting, I like the idea a Stargate into Hell, although had it been me I would’ve had the prophecy a little vaguer. Perhaps simply words, Gate/Hell/Atlantis/Ancients/Slayer. Maybe something along those lines?

Could do with a bit of work, spotted some easily corrected mistakes, I would say instantly, get an editor you need one. Otherwise, I like the idea, and look forward to more.
Comments from author:
*nods*

I'll consider it
Review By [mrsinister] • Date [11 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from MinaLynn
Review:
Excellent start! I can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Glad to here it... ;)
Review By [MinaLynn] • Date [4 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from Colpinky
Review:
Interesting story, it'll be interesting to see what happens to SG1 as well. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you
Review By [Colpinky] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from Bobboky
Review:
cool
Comments from author:
Thanks :p
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Episode I: The Gates of Hell" from LordCorwin
Review:
Looks very good ... but will wait until after the 2nd chapter before offering any critiques ... :)
Comments from author:
Understandable... ;)
Review By [LordCorwin] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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