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Review of chapter "Mark IV" from andiesimmo

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hey sorry Ive only just read this one, i have no excuse I'm just slow lol any way i love it so any chance of an update cause that would be of the good, thanks in advance :)

Review By [andiesimmo] • Date [24 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Mark IV" from CarpeNocturn

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Great story so far. The chapters are alittle smaller than what I prefer but other than that I have really enjoyed it. I hope you post more soon.

Review By [CarpeNocturn] • Date [27 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Mark IV" from borgrabbit

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Ben Haiku'd:

Love's shared kiss—exalts
It does—spiting winter's storms
In aspect—timeless

☻☺☻☺♥☺☻☺☻

Grammar nazi:
"That peeked Dawn's interest."
Please use 'piqued'. Peeked means to surreptitiously look at something.

Webster's:
Piqued, transitive verb
a : to excite or arouse especially by a provocation, challenge, or rebuff

"I thought about powering it with you magic."
I thought about powering it with your magic.

Sometimes I'm just a copy-editing S.O.B., but, yeah, Great chapter.

Comments from author:

Hihi.... no problem! Thanks for pointing out.
As my first language isn't english, I tend to overlook things like that.

So thanks for taking the time to read it so carefully :D

Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [24 Nov 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Mark IV" from Raider

Review:

nice, I like it.

what colors will dawn give it?

Comments from author:

Thanks....
Dunno, wait and see :)

Review By [Raider] • Date [24 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Mark IV" from Obsidian

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awesome chapter!

Comments from author:

Thank you!

Review By [Obsidian] • Date [24 Nov 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Saving Tony" from Rissah

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I'm enjoying it thus far, but would love to see it progress past the movie. You've set up dynamic relationships between Dawn and Tony, Dawn and Pepper - it'd be really interesting to flesh them out further. Or put in place a problem that Dawn couldn't fix with just a flick of her wrist and her magic.

Looking forward to what's to come! Great start!

Comments from author:

At first, thanks for your review I am glad you enjoy it
and don't worry there is some trouble ahead none of them will solve this easily.
That would be boring, wouldn't it? :D

Review By [Rissah] • Date [26 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Saving Tony" from Raider

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i still say you should suit dawn up, she'd make a hell of an addition to the ironman team.

that said, never have truer words been said than to never, ever, piss off a witch, you might not even live to regret it.

excellent chapter!

Comments from author:

To be honest, I am thinking about that too, who knows maybe you will soon enough see dawn in her own suit :D

Review By [Raider] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Saving Tony" from AriaDragoncrest

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Excellent

Comments from author:

Thanks

Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Saving Tony" from grd

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Wonder what Obi will use as a power source now? Magic? Scary thought. Wonder If Tony will craft armor for Dawn. Obi is not the type to quit.

Comments from author:

Yep, Obi isn't the type to quit, but that is the best about him, isn't it?

Review By [grd] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Saving Tony" from borgrabbit

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Dawn's green power,
Obadiah's stupid streak,
Though he's unaware.
Afghanistan Obadiah seek?
└☺┘

Comments from author:

*lol* very creative review, thanks :D

Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [24 Apr 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Breaking free" from Raider

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question, can dawn perform a switching spell?

if you're doing this how I expect, when stane steals tony's chest piece, could dawn switch it for the old mark 1 chest piece? be one hell of a prank, and foil stane's plans at the same time.

that said, very cool move with the one jet.

Review By [Raider] • Date [7 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Breaking free" from AriaDragoncrest

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Excellent

Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [7 Apr 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Crashing Parties and getting to know the truth" from Christy

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definitely a very good start...I'm loving it so far- can't wait to read more....I love Buffy and Iron Man and I really think you've done a great job integrating the two.

Review By [Christy] • Date [2 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Crashing Parties and getting to know the truth" from borgrabbit

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Really decent story, though spelling and grammar sort of slow it down a tad. Keep writing, though, because I don't read cruddy stories and your muse is doing a bang up job.
☺
Ciao‼

Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]

Review of chapter "Crashing Parties and getting to know the truth" from slmncpm

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oh dear. cockroach sounds too nice of a critter. primordial slime sounds good. *smirks*

Review By [slmncpm] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Not Rated

Iron Man - Magic Style